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Etiquette and Redemption II
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Published: December 23, 2011
Another in only 2 days, If I keep up this pace then I'll make it through this yet 2/7, lets keep it rockin on.

Anyway, got to be a bit lazy with this one, copied some of my own work but who's complaining. I know the quality isn't the best, plan on coming back to this once the competition is over but either way.

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Omny87's avatar
Omny87|Hobbyist Digital Artist
When you do come back to it, I'd check your punctuation, because there's a few missing periods and commas here and there. Also, I think in the third panel you meant to say "Are you sure you don't want me to come, Octy?" or "Are you sure you don't want me to come with you, Octy?" Because right now it's missing a "you" in there.
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ErgoCogito|Student Digital Artist
That's just the way some people say it. They drop the "you" after "with." e.g.-"Can I come with?"
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Omny87|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I see. Without a comma or anything, it just looked like there was a word missing.
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WOLLFFEEY's avatar
"Octy"? I think someone here might be a fan of The Vinyl Scratch Tapes... X3
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deathshadow1991's avatar
I am a fan of K-colt and the Vinyl Scratch Tapes but this was actually inspired by the fanfic Allegrezza which uses the same nickname.
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WOLLFFEEY's avatar
Well, I got that once I got to the part with Octavia looking for a bar. XD

And I'm glad you're a fan of both. Tell me, have you listened to the audio productions of The Vinyl Scratch Tapes? X3;;
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yeah but I must say I was not to impressed by the preformance, I mean it was good but it felt like it was lacking the energy and timing at places to be honest.
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PopeHatSkeleton's avatar
Where'd her bowtie go in the second to last panel?
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deathshadow1991's avatar
Yay, someone found the other Easter egg in the comic, basically I left a detail or two out of a few panels to see if anyone would notice just for the fun of it. So congratulations ^^
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That-Paranoid-Zombie|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww :C
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CoffeeGrunt's avatar
D'awww, she's not quite willing to admit that she enjoys Octy's company. :(
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deathshadow1991's avatar
you should know more than most that Vinyl is to cool for her own good
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CoffeeGrunt's avatar
I have to agree to that. xD
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TerraHv1's avatar
Poor Vinyl...
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deathshadow1991's avatar
oh there is a happy ending, just stay tuned and find out next week on... er... deviantart XP
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fatfan12345's avatar
fatfan12345|Hobbyist Digital Artist
...did vinyl read her thoughts!? 0.o
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deathshadow1991's avatar
no, just can't show her real feelings when octy is there
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fatfan12345|Hobbyist Digital Artist
well that makes more sense... but its not really as funny XD
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but it wasn't supposed to be funny XD
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