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Loneliness by DearPoetry Loneliness by DearPoetry
Someone asked me to write a spur of the moment ( hand written ) poem about loneliness. Enjoy my horrid scrawl. :D
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xxAiko-chanxx Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful <3
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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DompteurLoup Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The first stanza takes my mind to a more.. passionate place, while the second slaps me back to reality and reminds me I am lonely..
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry. :(
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:icondompteurloup:
DompteurLoup Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a compliment to your writing :) Being able to influence the reader's thoughts and emotions in more than one way with the same work is a great skill to posses :)
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graveyardancing45 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This description really strikes my mind.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:icondarksonicsoul:
darksonicsoul Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Amazing!
P.s. you have nice handwriting :D
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! lol
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:icondarksonicsoul:
darksonicsoul Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Hehe you're welcome!
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WarWolfLock Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
genius
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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chancerox Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i kind of thought of this in 2 ways - one is lack of physical love on a person, and the other one was that if a person has never been wounded, they can never feel apart of someone else.
incredible as usual :)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh, I really like that interpretation! :heart:
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the parallel to marred clavicles and loneliness. It's a melancholy idea, investing a lack of love in the physical.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) Yes, that was the idea.
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:iconadonael:
Adonael Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel so accomplished for pointing out the obvious ;)
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:iconileaheart:
ileaheart Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What do clavicles mean to you?
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A lot. I find them sexy.
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ileaheart Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh I think I understand what your poetry means now. Very nice ~
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:iconsleepwalkinginthesky:
Lovely poem~ And your handwriting isn't bad at all :D
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. C:
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VoiceActingChibi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your handwriting is definitely neater than mine! Great work, too. :3
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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VoiceActingChibi Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How on earth is that horrid scrawl? It's really just beautiful. Greatly done the actual word thing too, by hats to be expected by now ;)
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol thank you!
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EbolaSparkleBear Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Is this really abut loneliness or sexy sternums? :P
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Both? :P
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EbolaSparkleBear Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Oh that is hawt!:iconilavplz:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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Achille1996 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
I love how different males and females write...I certainly enjoy your handwriting, though!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't really think the style of someone's handwriting has anything to do with gender. Lol thanks!
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Achille1996 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Haha, I disagree! I think you can almost always tell them apart!
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I guess sometimes girls are more likely to use hearts with their "I's" or ever write bigger. But I know guys with beautiful, envy worthy handwriting and girls with unreadable chicken scratch. So, not really sure if it has much to do with gender all the time. Lol
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Rina-chanxMemories Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sure there are exceptions but most of the time boys have an unreadable writing and girls tend to write bigger and rounder, more elegant and readable in general. often boys even use more longhand while girls tend to use blockletters - but that's just what i've seen from the people from my grade and other friends :)
I used to be an exception too with a terrible handwriting that everybody mistook for a boy's writing but it's gone better :)

ps: your writing is lovely!
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lion-essrampant Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love your handwriting.
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
-______-;
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lion-essrampant Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What? 
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was my "omg my handwriting is horrible face." lol
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lion-essrampant Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Better than my handwriting. My handwriting it atrocious!
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wolflogics Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
i like your handwriting.... & i love your "i's"
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DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. lol
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why is your handwriting so perfect.

Mine looks like an elephant that suffered from a stroke.
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Have you gone blind? XD
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Your handwriting is lovely. :heart:
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:icondearpoetry:
DearPoetry Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol Thank you. :)
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