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Eisengrimms world of wonders.. by DeanMcClelland Eisengrimms world of wonders.. by DeanMcClelland
It needed more tweeking so I added wallpaper in the background.If anyone has suggestions to make this even better let me know?Thanks for watching!
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Smirtouille Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, I always like that character.
I think the background doesn't fit him, though. The bright red is overpowering our focus on the character which is quite pale and we almost can't see him. The background is also a bit flat, maybe the perspective of the ground is not right, but I'm not convinced by it.
I wonder if an exterior scene would fit or, something a little crazy, or far away, that would emphasize the character more. I don't have precize idea to get that better. Maybe brighter or just more colors on him and cooler colors for the background.
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DeanMcClelland Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I'm on the cusp of starting over.There is no story at this point so nothing of interest to draw people in.The picture of Eisengrimm is great but your right it seems flat.What to do what to do:(
Might have to sit on this one for a while.
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DeanMcClelland Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
This is maddening when there is still an element missing and I'm not quite sure which direction I should take it.Thanks for the suggestions.Savageworlds I took a look around for stock images of tentacles but didn't come across anything I liked.Igreeny I like your idea of the rabbit which I think I will play around with.It makes more sense.In-fact I was toying with that idea myself but haven't figured out how it will look in the end.I might have to sit on this one for a while.Keep the ideas coming.
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savageworlds Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010
Hi Dean,
I had not even read ~igreeny's comment before coming to a similar conclusion. My suggestion might be even more bizarre, but I was picturing something (perhaps a tentacle or two) poking out from behind or beneath the curtains.
Looking great so far.=)
-Tom
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"Civilization is hideously fragile [and] there's not much between us and the Horrors underneath, just about a coat of varnish." -(C. P. Snow)
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igreeny Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010
basicly this is awesome dude !!!! seriusly execution and all very neat but little boring if you ask me. You could add on ground in same awesome prespective some dead bunny in the hat or alive one and it would be so much more interesting ^^
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