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Published: March 8, 2013
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Its friday! Finally. This week sucked... On thursday, i had just the illusion, that it´s friday. -_-
So finally it´s friday.
Funny thing. Right after i have finished the winter pic, i had some needs to draw a summer pic. XD
This time i used some lighter colours and intentionally left some spaces empty.
I also spent some more time for the leaves....
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rary200000's avatar
For this story I'll name the girl with the lit cig in her hand "Nyoko" and the girl with the laptop 'Sai'.

"Sai you always bring that laptop with you. Come one just for once just unwind and enjoy the scenery."
'Nyoko sorry it's just that we have late term entrance exams coming up and i don't want to lag behind.' 
"Those are two months from now."
'But one can always be ready. What do you not study for your exams?' 
"I do but at home and at school. I do want to enjoy some of the freer times I get. They're getting more and more rare these days... Nyoko said as she pulled out a lighter and cigarette. (In all intensive reasons I'll say that in this reality smoking isn't really as dangerous as it is in our world.) Hey Sai, I think you should pull your shoes a bit from the water, they might get swept away..."
'Don't worry to much about that. The water moves really slowly and is only 50cm deep. They're not going anywhere. Besides I'm getting new ones later today, these cheap things the school provides just wear out too easy...'
"Yeah you're right I hate em."
'Nyoko where are your shoes anyway?'
"Oh they're in the car along with our other belongings. Those loafers are just soooo hot and stuffy and my feet hurt from being in them all day. The warm ground and the cool water honestly feel like heaven compared to those brown monsters. *Sigh* I should really give my reflexologist a visit some time. This body could use a good rubbing lately."
'Oh should i join you?'.
"Oh of course! Dero is always looking for new faces. But for now, I'll just let the coy stream do it's job."

(Some time passes)

'Hmm'
"Still stressing out are you?" 
'...'
"Come on Sai just relax yourself. Just think of the cool water running through, the birds singing, and the coy nibbling at your toes."
'Nyoko there aren't any coy at my- Hehehehe.'
"See told ya about the coy."
'Hohohoh, it kinda tickles.'
"You'll get used to it after 2 more visits."
'Ppphhht my goodness, how did you even find this place? (Snort)
"Ahhh me and my mother would always come here in the weekends. She loved feeding the fish."
'How is she?'
"Oh she's fine, just a bit busier these days..."
'Now I see why you like to relax here. Sorry if I said something wrong.'
"No it's fine."
...
'You know I think I studied enough for today, maybe I can put some music for the occasion.'
"Do it Sai, but no Kpop this time. Find something more calming."
'Alright no K.pop. How about some jazz?'
"That's good to me."

"Hey Sai, I think we're being watched. Isn't that one of our classmates?"
'Oh it is him. Hey how are you?'
"If you want to chat with us come here I have something to ask of you."
'Nyoko...?'
"*Whispering to Sai's ear*: Looks like we'll have that massage after all."

Both girls start to giggle a bit as their friend approaches closer to them. It looks like they'll have a good after school afternoon today.
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist

ah okay, a slice of live conersation.

Sounds relaxing beside she is learning. XD

I find it really interessting, that i could guess, that you are from the states by reading

the conversation. :)

The one left her stuff at their car. Japanese students can´t have driving licence.

The girl is learning with a laptop. IT Based learning is still not common in Japan.

OK, in Europe too. I Think in the states there where more of it.

If i do a remake of this pic, i think, i will give the right girl glases. (yeah stereotypes,

but it is not easy to draw them. )

Finally many thanks again for such creative response. :3

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It would make sense that she is using her laptop to learn something. I would have thought she would be doing some homework or studying for something but that works too. Though I never said she was IT learning just using it for work at a school.

That's really informative that you told me about japanese students not being able to have a license. It's too late for me to edit this story now (Curse DA's 24 hr editing period.) now but it is something that is helpful information for later. Hmm, maybe an older guardian drove them here or something and is near by or the other girl just put her stuff somewhere out of sight.

You're welcome! It's fun making these comments and it's even better when the artist enjoys them and gives feed back too!
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
OK, the new interface eclipse sucks... it deleted all my notifications. So i have seen that you have made three more short stories.
I would like to read that too... (sorry for late reaction. I was on several buisiness trip.. ) Do you have an idea which pics you have chosen?
Sorry for that. ^^°
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schillernatalia|Hobbyist General Artist
Das sieht ja paradiesisch aus....*_________* Ein schönes Konzept und du hast es super umgesetzt. ^^
Ich finds toll das die einen Blätter im Vordergrund stehen, das verdeutlicht die Vogelperspektive und ist zu gleich ein schöner Blickfang. :D
Ja, das Bild ist wirklich sehr schön, kommt gleich in meine Favos....>w< :heart:
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dankeschön. Hat mal was gefunzt hier. XD Irgendwie hab ich doch ein kleines Tief... ^^° Zumindest kommen zur Zeit nur so mittelmässige Bilder zu stande... (Ok, ich rede grad von den nächsten drei Bilder. XD )
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schillernatalia|Hobbyist General Artist
Ja, ich hatte auch so viel um die Ohren das es mir vorkommt als hätte ich eine Ewigkeit nichts mehr gemalt...;__; Dabei male ich viel, ich lade einfach nur wenig hoch, das ist alles...
Aber oke... Jetzt erst mal die Comissions fertig machen, dann gucke ich weiter. XD
Und son Kreatief verschwindet schnell wieder, brauchst halt nur ein wenig Inspiration und gute Laune. :>
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aso so viel? ui, wasn passiert? Bei mir ist sehr wenig passiert. Ich ziehe das Programm: "Kein Stress machen&haben" rigoros durch. Manche sagen, wie langweilig, aber mir gefällt das. XD
Tja, so schnell leider auch wieder nicht. Komisch ists nur, dass meine Skills nicht runter gehen. Nur die Ideen kommen nicht so. XD Und steigern tuen sich meine Skills leider demendsprechend auch nicht.. XD
Egal, kommt bald wieder. Hoffentlich...
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persuastrix|Professional Traditional Artist
Oh WOW , the perspective and everything.... great piece! :D
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx! :D
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persuastrix|Professional Traditional Artist
very welcome! ^-^
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fum316's avatar
fum316|Professional General Artist
There's something fishy about this one
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah fishy?
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fum316's avatar
fum316|Professional General Artist
Yes
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Rekuzzan|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, pretty and relaxing.
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx! :D
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Neudyx|Student Digital Artist
Great Work^^
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx! :D
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Wes-of-StarArmy|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cigarettes are so disgusting :(
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD So many people writing that. Its fictive so its ok, in reallife i am with you.
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Wes-of-StarArmy|Hobbyist Digital Artist
I worry that pictures of cute girls smoking can send a message that it is okay to the viewer.
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm... you know, i don´t beleave that the youth is so dump, that they have to follow every shit, cause they have seen that in a pic. I think its more a problem which social group the people are into. Those groupes force them to smoke...
Another reason is to be against parental authority.. MAny many different causes can be found and compaired to those reasons a picture with a smokin girl is.... nothing. I have also got more messages how bad smoking is. :D
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ChazzVC|Student Digital Artist
ew smoking...
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dead-robot|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Another one. XD As a element of my charcter its okay, in real life... smoking girls? no! XD
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