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DazzioN

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Specs.

Type of PC: Desktop
OS: Windows 10
Processor:Intel Core I5-8400 - Dual Core
RAM : 8 GB - DDR4-2400
HDD Space: 500GB
Graphic Card : Sapphire Pulse AMD Radeon RX 580 8 GB


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Favourite Movies
The Good, The Bad and the Ugly
Favourite TV Shows
Doctor Who, Game of Thrones, Homeland
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
The Red Army Choir, Coldplay, Capitão Fausto, Nirvana
Favourite Games
Counter Strike: Global Offensive, Battlefield 3, Battlefield 4, Team Fortress 2, Overwatch
Favourite Gaming Platform
Computer
Tools of the Trade
Photoshop CS6; Source Filmmaker and Blender
Other Interests
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I'm surprised you still remember me hahaha, it has been a really long time since I made wallpapers.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

You improved ALOT since last time i critiqued you, great job on improving artwork!

So lets get on with the critique.

This is one of those artworks that the Vision is great, such as the Impact, but sadly the Technique isn't exactly on the point.

Vision:

I totally see your idea of what you had in mind, on this frame. (frame = picture)
I think it looks gorgeous, i you could add more models, in certain places, but at this stage is pretty good.

Originality :

I like the originality in this because it is actually close to real world, where things aren't good and happy as the TV shows, and this frame tells alot of this. I can see that this is like an Normal day of an normal person in an normal place.

Technique:
I honestly think that Technique could be a little better for some aspects that i'm going to adress:
I see in this frame i see that the models are clipping.
Like the headset is clipping though the subject hair , hooves and wings clipping. The Doors poster from here looks like he is clipping to the brickwall, i think you could rotate a little bit in Y axis it can look better. The other poster i think is clipping aswell but i'm unsure if it is or not, since it is blurred.

Impact :
Looks great, because in this frame i can understand that subject isn't quite happy.
The colours can tell that. He is in an lonely dark atmosphere, where it feels cold.
And he is listening to music , because he is waiting for somebody or simply annoyed of the recent events, who knows.

Conclusion:

Great job, you improved alot since last time i criticized you and you're going in right direction, now that you have an idea of basics, you need to focus also on details, this is where most people fail. Details.

So i say again great job, favorited and keep going mate!
Relax
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Vision 3.5

I bet , the vision you had in your mind was much bigger and better than this picture.

The vision could be bigger and better if the Technique wasn't low. But aside from technique, vision looks good specially with the scenebuild, which is something that adds so much to a picture.

Originality 2.5

Its not the most original work, since the shot of the camera, the post editing isn't very strong on this picture, makes the picture losing impact, in other words it doesn't stand out of other splinter cell ponies pictures

But aside from the subject itself, the scenebuild i must say looks gorgeous.
There i can see the orginality, lets take the fences behind for an example, with the fences there, i can see that subject is sneaking up to a place where it shouldn't be allowed to be there, therefore the subject is preparing his/her guns.

Technique 2

Here , is where you made the most mistakes.

Although i like the way, that you added the record and the corners to give an idea that what, are we seeing is a security camera point of view or something similar, i think what lowers the quality is indeed the ridiculous amount of blur on colours, you give to each picture you make in your gallery, trying to follow Doge4ce style.

And honestly that, is confuses my brain and my eyes, because the picture looks catastrophic, in terms of amount of blur in the colours.

And if that camera, is a security camera, it should be on higher level than the subject (Twilight), and hanging on a wall.

If the camera is in this level that means that the wall probably collapsed (Assuming by the scenebuild behind subject where walls collapsed)

Now the question is, how did camera survived and still works after, the wall on it collapsed?

And if i were the subject i wouldn't let the camera record footage of me. The subject must be really distracted specially with night vision googles.

I see that the Subject is on Rule of Thirds place but,there is another mistake.
When a subject is facing left side, there should be space on left, not right like you did in this picture.

When camera is like this, like you did, is when somebody is sneaking behind the subject or something similar, which the Subject (Twilight) isn't main character of the shot.

Impact 3.5

The Impact here, is one of your best, and sadly again, could be bigger if originality and technique were better aswell.

The most impact here is from the scenebuild.
Sometimes, scenebuild is the most important and most valuable thing in the picture, and i mean more valuable than subject itself!

Because the scenebuild, explains to us, what is happening, where is the subject at, what ambient is it, what time in the place is the shot, and gives alot of information, without even looking at the title, or the description whatsoever!

Scenebuild gives alot of impact to the picture, and on this category you were decent. Not good, not great , not perfect, but decent.

That means there is room for improvement in scenebuild,and picture overall.



I see you're improving on Source Filmmaker alot, keep going. You're on the right path.
Splinter Twilight
What do you mean by different skins? Also, you can contact me on Discord — Dazz#3356
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