literature
Struggle of the pain

By davebold370
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Oh sweet pain,
That drags my world away,
I long for death,
Giggling faces bind me here,
As I lose so they gain,
My dark slumber delays,
I draw upon His breath,
As the deer.
That drags my world away,
I long for death,
Giggling faces bind me here,
As I lose so they gain,
My dark slumber delays,
I draw upon His breath,
As the deer.
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I have hurt myself. The pain is great. It's been a full year of pain. I want to die. But my kids are the reason I don't. But I can't do it myself. So, I look up and ask for help.
I have hurt myself. The pain is great. It's been a full year of pain. I want to die. But my kids are the reason I don't. But I can't do it myself. So, I look up and ask for help.
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The poem is deeper than the first 4 lines.
As I lose so they gain. As I lose my strength the family gains theirs.
My dark slumber delays, it delays because they bring me joy because they gain.
I draw upon His breath, is a point that I draw upon Christ's breath for strength
As the deer, flows with the song that is linked. As I am physically and spiritual drained, I thirst for time with Christ.
I hope that helps.
As I lose so they gain. As I lose my strength the family gains theirs.
My dark slumber delays, it delays because they bring me joy because they gain.
I draw upon His breath, is a point that I draw upon Christ's breath for strength
As the deer, flows with the song that is linked. As I am physically and spiritual drained, I thirst for time with Christ.
I hope that helps.
