How does that explain your strange spelling of 'homunculus'.
I'm not a fan of Manga and even less so when plot lines recycle concepts like homunculi (plural of homunculus) and the Philosopher's Stone with no respect whatsoever for the original meaning of those words.
The intentional use of incorrect spelling is acceptable, but only when it adds some kind of meaning to your art. Your spelling looks more like a careless mistake than a deliberate act of artistic rebellion.