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"Jack o Knives, Jack o Lanterns, Jack the Giant Killer, Jack the Ripper, Jack the Skeleton, Jack the Wolfman, Jack of Spades, Graveyard Jack, Jack of Smiles, Jack of Wiles, Jack Frost, Jack the Jack of Many Trades, Jack the Jack of Many Shades," said the man, who's face could not be seen, "Jack be nimble! Jack be quick!"

He grinned, hard, visibly painfully around the scars and wrenching musculature. "Jack'll jump over the candlestick. Jack the Ripper, Jack the Knife, Jacky boy will take your life. Jack fell down and hurt his crown, but Jill's head came tumbling after."

The woman twitched, holding her hands up, and trying to backtrack for the public telephone booth. "Easy, wolf-man, my name is Susan- don't- d-don't hurt-"

She sprayed his face with mace and tried to run for the glass. Or would have, if the shadows of his hood hadn't lengthed down his face further and protected his unseen eyes, and if his shadow wreathed claws had not grabbed her leg mid stride and ripped. She howled like the wolf he looked like, bones and ligaments shredding in a spray of gruesome claret, and Jack slowly smiled a terrible smile as she swore and flopped around in pain raining.

Then he bent and bit.
You don't know Jack.

:icontopios: did the image and created the character, and did the challenge!request. I may expand or redo it entirely based on her thought.
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DarthVengeance Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
Theif
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whiteguardian Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
All about Jack? Nice story, i like to see him in fullbody one day :)
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DarthVengeance0325 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps you will yet! I intend to work on and with him more. ^__^
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Rosemarri Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
AAAAAAAAAAGH. More please!
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DarthVengeance0325 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:salute: Yes m'am as soon as there's more, m'am! Still finishing transcribing the last bit of the Star Wars RP section, too, iffen ye still want to see it. _^
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Rosemarri Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
Of course!
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topios Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Like I said: I'm amused. If it's any fun for you I encourage proceeding.

What can I say, I like my mental cases punny and homicidal it seems.
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DarthVengeance0325 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D

Punny it shall beee.
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topios Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well he certainly seems to be amused. Not so sure most people share his sense of humor. At least not in that state of mind. Heh.
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Connya Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
heehee this be fun!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!
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DarthVengeance0325 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
As you command, m'lady. I'll get on that.
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Connya Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ok :D
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