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Caption King life was wonderful,he is the captain of squad 9,he fought alot of hollow,and became great friend with captain Gilbert and captain Andrew.But he miss Tim,for years,he has not found his best friend,as if he was gone forever.His zanpakuto,Ying Yang Drago,was a dragon that has the power of light and darkness.His zanpakuto from is a twin sword with one that has light,the other is darkness.But than,one day,his zanpakuto turn into a sleeveless girl with purple hair and big breast.Than a unknown person came thought his door,and his name is Nar."What do you want." "I came to help you." "Huh?"Than a light came from all the captain rooms.The first was Soi Fon,her zanpakuto was glowing,than it became a little girl with a metal finger as her arm.That little girl was Suzumebachi.Than captain Hitsugaya zanpakuto,Hyōrinmaru,became a man with white hair and a X-like scar on his face.Both lieutenant and captain zanpakuto into their human form.While everyone was confuss and shock,hollow began coming through the wall of soul socitey.The zanpakuto try to fight,but than realize that somehow,their power were gone.To make thing worse,four adjuchas wielded zanpakuto,so did the lesser hollow.To everyone mind,how did the hollow wielded a zanpakuto,they fought that only arrancar can wield zanpakuto.While everyone try to hold the hollows,Nar and King ran through the medic room."Okay,what the hell is going on here." "Somehow,the hollows have wielded zanpakuto."King was shock and Surprise."That impossible,no way hollow can have zanpakuto.How did this happen."Nar try to explain the stituation."About a year ago,human were gone miss every day.The hollow do not eat human so much,they only eat human when they are really hungey.But instead,the hollow just capture. them,with out harming them."While they were talking,the dragon girl woke up,finding herself in a medic room.Than she saw her friend,Albert talking with someone.Still mad at him,she push him while he was to busy talking with Nar."What the hell are I.Who is this guy." "Ying Yang,it me,your partner and owner." "What,i am not Ying Yang,am Tim,you dummy."Both Nar and Albert were shock."No,you are not Tim,he a guy." "What do you mean,i am a g..."Tim look down,to be wearing a sleeveless clothing,and to have a big breast.She look to the mirror,to have blue eye,long purple hair,and a girl face."EKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK."Tim scream like a girl,than look piss and grab Albert."What the hell have you done to my body,you bastard." "I..I don't know.You were my zanpakuto,how could have know that my beat friend has transform into a girl and to my zanpakuto.How could that happen."But than hollow were smashing through the door."Stay here,i will take care of them."Nar began slashing hollow one by one.But then hollows smash through the door.
"Stay here," Nar instructed, "I will take care of them. Nar began slashing hollow one by one. Normally this would be easy, but the hollows used their zanpakuto which made thing harder for Nar. Sudddenly Captain Gilbert and Captain Andrew jumped through the window. Justin had an eight point star bow, his shikai. Aaron had his shikai, a square shield and double-edged katana. First second the two landed and stood ready. The second second Aaron was on teh other side of them with the head of the cross on his shield extending beyond the shield as a second blade. Half of the hollows had arrow holes in their mask, and the other half had their mask cut in two. All of the hollow faded at once. Justin's bow reverted to a chain on his wrist. Aaron's sword and shield reverted to his scabard and dagger. The scabard was straped to his wrist. He shelthed the dagger and then turned to Albert for answers. "King, what's happening, who's this guy,and who's the girl?"
"Guys, this is Nar, an arrancar, and this is Tim, my best friend." Justin gave Aaron a stern look. "What?" Aaron shrugged. "I said the probablity was low. I never said it was impossible." It was an interestin topic to discuss, but they knew it was too dangerous to stay. The group headed to the captain commander's room, to find Yamamoto. They found Mr.Z, Albert's master, there instead. But things only got worse, as Nar grab Tim and pointed a blade at her. "Nar, what are you doing?" Albert asked. "Didn't you get it?I was trying to make you one of us," Nar confessed. "Also, our plan is to destroy the soul socitey." "Our?" But they were not alone, a man wearing a white coat, a hole in his chest,and two long horns atop of his head was there. Both Aaron and Justin recongize that face. "Captain Sasuke," Aaron breathlessly in disbielf.
The story continue as Captaion and lieutenant zanpakuto turn into their human form and have no power.Than hollows came,with zanpakuto,and Tim return,but have the body of a girl.What will happen next.

Gilbert and Andrew belong to:iconangelicdemonslayer:.

Nar belong to:iconuighhgh:.
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AngelicDemonSlayer Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
Interesting. Though might need a little adjusting. My next one should be between last one and this one as far as time line goes. Plus he should already know Yin Yang is Tim. Just a little surprised that Yin Yang remembers that. Oh grammer could use a little work. You keep using than instead of then. Overall nice twist.
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
What do you mean 'between last one and this one'.Are you stoping?I like your story.
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AngelicDemonSlayer Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
I meant my story 'The Sword puzzle' goes between 'the zanpaktou life' and 'zanpaktou trouble'
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uighhgh Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
nar you idiot i told you to use the confusion to convince Albert to join us

that is my nar right
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
Yes,it is your Nar,but what do you mean 'confusion',are you trying to make me one of you.
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uighhgh Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
well remember i told you that i left the soul socity after losing the first caption seat to yamato and i took other soul reapers who thought i would of been a better captian to the world of the living and we plan on returning some day to destroy the 13 court guard squad and replace them with my fallowers which are soul reapers, arrancar, vizords, and hollow
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
Okay,i fix it.Now you are a villian.
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uighhgh Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
thanks
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