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Long time ago,There was nine tail beast that rule the lands.The beasts fought each othere to control the other land.Shukaku,the one tail.The two tail cat.Three tail giant turtle.The four tail monkey.The five dolphin horse.The six tail slug.The seven tail horned beatle.The eight tail giant tox.And the nine tail fox.One day,a new beast was born from the stars.It had silver scale,Two larged wings,Long claws and fangs.It had long neck,and ten tails.It is the ten tail dragon.Unlike the others,it did not have the instant,instaed it use reason,also,it a girl.For years,it was kind to mankind,giving hope and dream and happiness.Everyone love her,but than war came,and people as her help.Though she does not fight for killing,but want to protect them.While fighting the enemy,all nine tail beasts surrended her."Yo are not one of us,you are weak,you shoud not exist.Now die,"Say nine tail fox."No,i can not let you cause the deatg of my kind.I know were are the tailed beasts,but if want to kill,than i must stop you all."Though there was nine of them,they were no match,for she is the most powerful beast of all.She used the ability of all nine tail beasts and power to beat them.But before she could win,nine tail attack out of nowhere and fire a blast at a village.She sacriface her self to save the people.She was wounded,than she vanish into the sky.So now there was nine beats.However,one day,at the day naruto was born,a other child was born,with a symbol on it tattos.
BEAST/ HOST and (VILLAGE)

ONE TAILED SHUKAKU-----Gaara-----(Sand village)
TWO TAILED CAT-----Yugito Nii-----(Cloud Village)
THREE TAILED GIANT TURTLE-----Yagura-----(Mist Village)
FOUR TAILED MONKEY-----Roshi-----(Stone Village)
FIVE TAILED DOLPHIN HORSE-----Han----- (Stone village)
SIX TAILED SLUG-----Utakata-----(Mist village)

SEVEN TAILED HORNED BEATLE-----Fu-----(Waterfall Village)
EIGHT TAILED GIANT OX-----Killer bee-----(Cloud village)
NINE TAILED FOX-----Naruto-----(Leaf Village)

But once,ther was a tenth tails dragon!
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RoninOfDeath Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
the tenth tails isn't a dragon. I know you didn't know that when you made this. You might want to edit your Author's Comments.
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Actually, there was only 9 tail beasts in the naruto world, and the one who your talking about dosen't have ten tail, but more. This story is a fanfication, so please didn't tell me what to change. But your right about my grammer, so i will edit my work.
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RoninOfDeath Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
it's the Jubi or 10-tails. [link] count them.
and I wasn't talking about your grammer I was talking about a disclaimmer about how you know there is a ten tails to keep away people like me.
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
okay, fine. You are right. But this story is an alternate story, let just say that. Beside, i made that story before "Declar War" came out.
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RoninOfDeath Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
yeah I know I said I knew that in my first post.
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uighhgh Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
cool if youre going to make a story from this you can use my character
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
What are your character?
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uighhgh Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
member of the akatsuki
ex-stone shinobi
ability to absorb the dead copying their abilities, bloodlines and jutsus
black hair like deidara without the ponytail
Kakuzu's replacement
would you need any more info
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Okay,sure,sent it to the note.
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uighhgh Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
member of the akatsuki
ex-stone shinobi
ability to absorb the dead copying their abilities, bloodlines and jutsus
black hair like deidara without the ponytail
Kakuzu's replacement
would you need any more info
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benwolf0 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
cool
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
You like it,wait till the chapter start.
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Darth-Drago Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
That right,there was a ten tail beast,but she was gone,or so we thought.And who is this unknown child,find out next time
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