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Look at the little emo girl
She crys all night
She hardley sleeps
She cuts herself
and sometimes wants to die
Does anyone ever notice her?
She hides behind her hair,
her dark eyeliner and tons of black clothes
She wears arm warmers and long sleeved shirts
and she has lots of piercings
She likes someone that barely even notices her
She chews on her lip ring everytime he walks by her
Alone she remembers her childhood
alone and beaten
living with abusive parents
She blocks part of her memories
not wanting to remember the word rape
She crys in her room and  writes in her notebook
She's written so many suicide notes but has not bee able to follow through
Wanting death but afraid to die
She drowns herself in her music
and wonders if anyone would care if she was to die
She hides her scars from everyone around her
She lets her past be known to none
All the beatings, all the pain
the mental and physical scars
Alone she crys
with only her razor and awaiting her doom
Will anyone try to help her?,
try to see the real her?
Will he ever notice her feelings for him?
Will she ever be able to sleep?
Noone ever notices the emo girl
Especially when the emo girl
is right in front of you...
this isnt really a poem or anything its just something i wrote...
if u like it then please dont steal it...if u dont like it them please keep ur thoughts 2 urself...
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:iconitsjustskylar:
itsjustskylar Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing Heart 
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NaurtoxSasuke Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
this moed me soo much igot naked thank u 4 sharingluv uM<3
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:iconscarlitprincess:
scarlitprincess Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Artist
u know i cry
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:iconscarlitprincess:
scarlitprincess Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Artist
wow i like it its jus like me
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:iconthree-cats-one-dog:
three-cats-one-dog Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I featured this: [link]
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:iconlonleyecho:
lonleyecho Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009   Writer
awwe makes me wanna cry, this "something you wrote" is amazing. Describes me exactly
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
lol it was the old me
but thank you.
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:iconlonleyecho:
lonleyecho Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009   Writer
Welcome
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:iconzexionfangirl4eva:
zexionfangirl4eva Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009
so beautiful!
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
thank you.
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:iconzexionfangirl4eva:
zexionfangirl4eva Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009
your welcome!!
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:iconbookworm-87:
bookworm-87 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009
i cry alone too, this truly powerful. if you need to talk i'll listen.:hug:
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:iconmercenarysrequiem:
mercenarysrequiem Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
that's super sad... but i love it!i have a lot of ahem.. friends... who could relate to this, but not the abuse...luckily...i can't imagine how horrible it must have been.
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
thanks for the words.
feel free to read any of my other stuff.
<3
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:iconmercenarysrequiem:
mercenarysrequiem Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008
thanx! your writing is realllly good!
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:iconmercenarysrequiem:
mercenarysrequiem Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008
thanx! your writing is realllly good!
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008
well thank you very much<3
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:iconcatlikeacat:
catlikeacat Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008   Digital Artist
I might make a comic out of this, if that's okay with you.
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
i dont mind as long as you let me know and credit me where its needed =]
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:iconcatlikeacat:
catlikeacat Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008   Digital Artist
Okay
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:iconkyosohma7:
KyoSohma7 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
Aww this is really Good xD I'll add it to my favorites
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RayAndEdward Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008  Student Writer
Very very good. And accurate. I was never raped, but I've always been the little emo girl. I just barely have been able to break free outta that death trap.
I liked this alot. Good job
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5x5shadow5x5 Featured By Owner May 12, 2008  Student General Artist
aawww poor emo girl a lot of these lines relate to me so i know how a lot of that feels like
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:iconxxkaterinaxx:
xXkaterinaXx Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008
Oh! I absolutely loved this.. It's hard to say something without offending someone but all I say that it was awesome :)
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008
lol well thnaks.
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:iconcrimson--butterflies:
yay!!
is there like part 2 or something :D u should turn it into a story O,O o that would b 2 cool!!
hehe yay
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008
lol i never thought about writing a story about my life...just poetry...
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:iconcrimson--butterflies:
hehe i love these kinda storys so if u do turn it into 1 dont forget to tell me ;)
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:iconkibou-shinkou:
kibou-Shinkou Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
almost all of that relates to me
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
<3
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:icondaughterofthemoon87:
DaughterOfTheMoon87 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
OMFG!!!! I love it!! How did you ever come up with something so good???? I am emo too......we aren't like all people say we are....
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2008
because this was written about me.
thnaks
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:icondaughterofthemoon87:
DaughterOfTheMoon87 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008
Awesome....
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
thnaks
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:icondaughterofthemoon87:
DaughterOfTheMoon87 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
welcome!!
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:iconmezu-chan:
Mezu-chan Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008
Wow, I think you did a good job on this :)
I like it very much!
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2008
thnaks kindly <3
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:iconshinkazu:
Shinkazu Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2008
Omg I love you emo kids are the best! :thumb39275811:
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2008
lol thnaks...?
whats the thumb thing it didnt show as anything...
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:iconmojothecat:
MojoTheCat Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
Wow that is great i love it =D
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
thnaks <3
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shatterd-soul-13 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
wow, thats amazing!
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008
thnaks ^^
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shatterd-soul-13 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
np :)
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:iconschaduwmeisje:
Schaduwmeisje Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2007
I like the thing that you wrote....:heart:
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2007
well thank you.
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:iconxxlunarisxx:
xXLunarisXx Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2007
The beginning seems a lot more like a list of things than anything else. Also, the part about her parents seems a lot more important than her liking a guy, I don't think you should really make such a big deal about the guy because it hardly matters. And you need spell check.
Also,
"Wanting death but afraid to die
She drowns herself in her music
and wonders if anyone would care if she was to die"
Sounds bad because you end two lines so close to each other with the same word. Use a different word for the third line, maybe?
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2007
thank u kindly for the critisism.
:heart:
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:iconxxemomcrfreakxx3:
xXEmoMCRFreakXx3 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2007
wow. really good.... im kinda spechless cause i can relate
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:icondarkwolfoukima:
darkwolfoukima Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2007
thank u
<3
:hug:
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