Trying to apply what I've learn from 
when he was on my country...
when he was on my country...I cant change my style... trying to mix his technique with mine...
Sorry Violet... I dont like the result yet!
did she increase her breast size? wish i could touch them XD Anyways, great job on this! she's looking goooood! 
Holly Molly !!! Violet ! Looking Real Good! I like this piece, colors are bright and eye catching detail. I am Impressed once again.
The best way to adapt and evolve your own style is to keep at it, since things like techniques and new methods tend to sink in better over time. I can defiantly see some of what you have learnt coming though in the picture though. Maybe try something like your time attack pictures if you are lacking on time due to your commissions.
Honestly there really TOO much for me to offer as far as a serious critique goes, and I'm not a particularly skilled artist myself, but here's a few things I've noticed
-Her looks boob is bigger than her right one
-The way the hair juts off her head makes it look stiff, as if it were gelled to be like that or something
-Feel free to use backgrounds, they can really liven an image, I mean no one lives in a purple gradient void, though it's not that big of a deal since it's just a sort of practice piece
-You should probably make the strap of her shirt thicker so it doesn't look like part of the outline
-The highlights on her skin seem a bit exaggerated, skin usually isn't that shiny
-On the subject of highlights, some of your shadows and highlights kind of contradict each other, where the light source is coming from seems to vary from body part to body part. For example the highlight on her arm suggests a leftward light source, but the highlight on her breasts suggests a rightward one. Granted that may be a shortcoming of my own knowledge, and if so feel free to disregard this.
Otherwise your line work is pretty clean and the colors aren't flat, proportions, breasts aside, check out. All in all you're a more than competent artist and I hope you don't mind my petty nit-picking.
Really thank you for your comment...
Well in fact, this artwork is a practice for coloring, the lineart is only pencil and the colors were made quick
I'm tryting to improve my skills, but this was a "prototype" maybe the next work will be better
thank you again
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