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..g..i Anatomy (Needs Critiques)
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Edit.: Applied the changes that :iconandrew19787: pointed out. :D.

I'm currently creating the models of my character, ..g..i, and am wondering if the anatomy I gave her looks proportional. I've used bases and some 3-D models as references, and edited whatever I could see that looked off. X3. Honest critiques are wanted. :3.

Copyright of ..g..i belongs to me, and anyone trying to steal her or any of my other creations will be drop-kicked by her through a building, and then they'll be prosecuted in their :iconbobbarkerplz::iconspeechbubbleplz: "!!BRAND-NEW, BROKEN BODY.!! The "Broken Body Delta" comes with all of your broken bone and punctured organ needs! The total cost of this item adds up to: Your life in a wheelchair!" Sounds fun, right? :3.
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AniDrewit|Student Filmographer
The crotch could be a little lower; technically its the midpoint of the body. That's probably what your problem is with the legs.
Also, consider the ear relative to the jaw. The place around where the jaw hinges should be around where the ear should be. Take a look at what ears look like too, because all I see are flat pieces of skin (no earholes).
The hand from the side view looks a little big in comparison to the front view too.
I'm assuming her clothes are fairly tight because otherwise her shirt can just hang off her breasts a bit (leaving space between the clothing and her body) as well as from her armpits to her waist. For casual wear, loose-ish pants are acceptable too but optional.

Other than that you got the anatomy for a girl standing pretty well done. Try other poses and see if you can keep the anatomy just as good >:3
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DARKRYUKO|Professional Filmographer
I applied the critique. So hopefully she looks better now. Again, arigatou for critiquing. :D.
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AniDrewit|Student Filmographer
Yup, looks better :)
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DARKRYUKO|Professional Filmographer
Yay! Now for 3/4 view. :iconangryderpplz:.
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