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:icondarkmario2:DarkMario2 posted a status
I have a lot of fun with foreshadowing.

Every chapter of Ace is filled with it.

I have a lot planned.

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Tomato127 Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Adding foreshadowing is one of my favorite things to do while writing. Requires a looot of planning, though, and no turning back if you change your mind later if it has been uploaded (something I do all the time).

I like re-reading the chapters to notice the foreshadowing you've added. I like theorizing what might appear in the next chapters, too.
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DarkMario2 Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Have you found any yet?
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Tomato127 Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm afraid I might spoil some things, so I'll mention one I really liked: The association of fire with the Spark of Humanity (probably fits more under symbolism than foreshadowing, though, but whatever).

Ace and Melody's fiery actions/eyes, the damage of the Spark spreading like wildfire, etc. I also like how the "Spark of Humanity" chapter name was not a random fancy chapter name, but actually part of the story.
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DarkMario2 Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad someone got that. I keep hoping someone would mention stuff like that but one ever does.
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Tomato127 Featured By Owner May 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I totally get that feeling. I've hid small details in my stuff as well but there's no mentions yet. I'm not too sure how I feel about it, though. On one side, I don't know if anyone found it or if they're keeping it secret for others to find, but on the other side, it stops being a secret once it's talked about.
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