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Sadistic Wishes

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Love me
Hate me
Hit me
Rape me

Hurt me
Scorn me
Kick me
Whore me

Hide me
Find me
Beat me
Bind me

Abuse me till I can barely stand
Knock me down and make me get up again

Teach the lesson
Till I get it
Break my bones
So I don't forget it

Don't stop
Till I turn black
Cut my veins
Don't go back

Make it end
Take the pain away
Finish it now
Until all life fades away..
umm...wrote it this summer...and I was more than likely on something..
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pewds45637738Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is more.. masochistic, rather than sadistic.
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claersoapStudent Traditional Artist
Hello :3
A very sweet text ^^ I really like it, it is definitely my taste :D
But I think the title shouldn't be 'sadistic', more 'masochistic'
I think this fits more, because you describe it from the perspective of an masochist.
Don't you think?
LenaSkitch's avatar
This is amazing. :heart: Story of my life.
livegoofy's avatar
OMG that is incredibly sexy....................................................................................
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Sonic-s-ShadowStudent Writer
It strikes me to make the comment... this is more masochistic than sadistic, seeing as the desire is for pain inflicted upon the self of the poem.
FreeOrLife's avatar
Foocking awesome x)
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KazzelkHobbyist Traditional Artist
I Like this very much +fav very sadistic
rallyroundthefamily's avatar
on something or not, i like it
agenda666's avatar
:heart:
so Sadistic:rose:
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charlottagrey Traditional Artist
loved it, very effective, especially the beginning
Mal685's avatar
Really good. Moving. +fav
sic-star's avatar
I really like how u start out with a repetitious feel and move onto a more traditional ryhme scheme...........beautiful work.
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