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Raz and the Everything p1
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Published: September 26, 2012
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This is the first page of what will hopefully become a finished story... eventually. The story is based on a very old character of mine, but since he's such an old character, I've took the liberty of redesigning him so he looks more cute and cuddly. The original character was based on Dr Who, but that was a long LONG time ago (I was eleven at the time), and the redesign is supposed to distance him from the original premise.

I'm planning of having four arcs, with each arc being made up of (hopefully) less than ten pages. This is the first arc, Origins.
I'm also planning for my original Raz to make a prominent appearance in the third arc.

If I finish this entire comic, I'll actually answer an age old question about my own character. Also, if I ever make spin-off stuff, such as games or other comics, they will probably take place in-between the second and third arc.

I hope this explains my plans and my character, and how excited I am to actually get the first page out of my head and onto digital paper. Thank you for reading.


PS: This first page is a little slow and boring for my tastes, but I suppose that's the price for a coherent plot.
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Getting an unexpected present in the first page already? To me, the pacing seems fast enough...:thumbsup: though, I won't lie, if it was a bit slower, it would be too slow.

All those roundy shapes and pastel colors... They sure make him look cute. :nod:

I like how we get hints of the time period from the first page: the rocket, future-like towers in the distance... Now I'm even more sure this story is somehow related to Space!
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Wow. No one has commented for 2 years? Hm.Deal With It - Elsa (Icon) 
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Well, so much for my attempt at making the world record for most amount of time without a comment.
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