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DanSchoening

Dan Schoening
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No worries man! Keep on inspiring man, love your work :)
kck-SHNNNGGG
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

As always, the draftsmanship of your work is top notch. The attention to detail in the handles is a great touch, and the inking of the piece is solid, creating nice positive/negative shapes within the characters.

The only critique I can suggest is that the piece as a whole feels top right heavy due to the heavy black sky. Perhaps adding some imagery to the bottom left would help the flow of the composition, giving the eye something to come back to, and drag the viewer back into the piece. That moth could even be moved over and angled into the bottom left.

Also, maybe adding in some black shapes to represent windows in the background buildings might be interesting. May not work, but would be cool to experiment.

Overall your skills in drawing and inking are inspiring. Kudos on the piece.
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Happy Birthday, Bob! Hope you are doing well. Your talents are still amazing. Cheers
A little late to the party seeing this, but it's amazing! Humbled and honored :) Keep Bustin'!
Ghostbusters - Melanie Ortiz