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My name is Asriel,
I know it seems surreal,
But down in the Underground,
That name is finely sound.

I had a happy home,
One thousand years ago,
But what won't leave my head,
Was when I found them dead,

A human fell inside,
Glad that they had survived,
I brought them back with me,
For my parents to meet.

"Howdy!" I called to them,
It was a real godsend.
I soon received an answer:
"Hello, my name's Chara."

I thought that we'd be friends,
Until the very end,
I saw their lack of will,
As they started to kill.

First, my mother went down,
They escaped into town,
Laid waste upon the land,
'Til they were stopped by Sans.

He was not too best pleased,
No way for him to ease,
"I've never met an iller,
dirtier brother killer."

He was struck with their blade,
His sockets filled with hate,
They turned to me as he fell,
"Welcome to unholy hell."

They soon pulled out their knife,
Desired to take my life,
In order to save mine,
I must reset the timeline,

Corrupt with genocide,
Determined deep inside,
I fled from pure evil,
Even my fear remains still.

With the last of my power,
I was turned to a flower,
The world had soon gone black,
Large letters coming back,

I woke up with a yawn,
I found my form had gone,
A human came to me,
Similar to that beast,

I couldn't bear a grudge,
But I refused to budge,
As they began to help,
Later I had to yelp,

"Frisk, why did you come here?
Why do you hold me dear?"
I saw the look in their eyes...
"I don't want you to die."


I see it clearly now...
She is a clever cow.
Determinated from love,
Just needed one small shove,

Don't take this much to heart-
This story, from the start,
Was just a ranting steamer,
After all I'm just a Dreemurr.
WARNING: MASSIVE SPOILERS FOR UNDERTALE'S TRUE PACIFIST RUN!

These lyrics were actually written by me, inspired by many other lyrical remakes on YouTube. I fucking LOVE this game, even if I haven't played it...
His Theme:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=02w3IB…


I'm thinking of writing lyrical parodies of Undertale soundtracks more often. Want me to do more? Send a request as to I should make lyrics for. It could be any Undertale track, be it a boss fight, to even a casual character's theme.

Edit: There has been a cover made by Snow - Snow! Many thanks to her crediting the work, though it took a while for me to dig around to find it. :lmao:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=TmYum7…
Here's the video! Thank you so much, I find it wonderful!

Edit: Oh. My. God. :iconmountainsprite:MountainSprite. Your cover is just fantastic. Please be sure to check out her video, because it is simply beautiful. Her voice, the choice of His Theme... Almost brought a tear to this stone cold bastard's eye. :heart:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=vI5xE4…
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EmoBayleef Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this
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DeepDownAlone Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, right now i am crying. This is SOOOOOO beautiful! I just can't believe, that someone really made this lyrics... 
And i need you to ask something.
Can i do a cover on it..? Because.. if i can, i'll cry even more.. (( Of course i'll give you credit! Don't worry, my friend
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I think you better get a new box of tissues, since you'll be pleased to know that I always allow people to make covers for my lyrics provided they give credit to the works of all authors- That be for the lyrics, the artworks/animation, should they decide to ask someone for it, and the music.

Also, I'm absolutely over-the-moon that you enjoy the lyrics- Only thing I wish I could do is work up the brainpower to write again.
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DeepDownAlone Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup, i'm crying. And i think, that you would like to hear my cover, right? That's no problem. I'm already working on it =)
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DeepDownAlone Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you really want.. : www.youtube.com/watch?v=dk0kae…

And yep, sorry for my english. I amd from Cz so...
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CoolGamingNL Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017
can i maybe do a cover?
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course- Just remember to credit all original artists, and please link me to the cover so I can listen to it. ♫
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CoolGamingNL Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2017
i would, and thank you!
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome!
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Dragonjek Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
The lyrics together well, and it's pretty good, but...
The degree to which this deviates from Undertale confuses me.
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not sure if I was just super tired or drunk at the time.
Probably super tired because I was writing it in college.
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Elvinkin66 Featured By Owner May 1, 2017  Student Writer
I like it in till you started the who Chara is an evil demon thing then it was bad.
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a shame you didn't enjoy it, but that doesn't automatically make something "bad". Now granted, I have openly admitted that this isn't my finest piece, in fact none of my works I consider "fine". But I don't call them bad either; That is all in the eye of the beholder.
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Elvinkin66 Featured By Owner May 2, 2017  Student Writer
It is a good song.

But I naturally can not stand evil Chara now that I know the truth

Have ing the child as some demonic murder puts a sickly feeling in my stomach.


Sorry.
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
At the end of the day, this is merely a fan song. NONE of what is in these lyrics are true canon.
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Elvinkin66 Featured By Owner May 5, 2017  Student Writer
Yes.

But this goes competently against canon!

If Chara went around killing then why dose Asgroe, the chorus, and Asreil say good things about them!
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It goes against the canon, but as I've said before, it isn't meant to be related to the canon.
The idea was more or less meant to be a kind of nightmare that Asriel had at the time of writing it.
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ArixSyahmi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2017
Can i have your permission to make a song cover out of this? I will credit you as always <3
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely! I'd love to hear the final result, so please link it to me when you're finished~!
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HaileyDeviantArt Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2016
Amazing! <3 
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Wolfie-Void Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
But it made me so sadddd
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Wolfie-Void Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful I found this wonderful lyrics by Madame Madrigal's wonderful cover! You truely have skills in writing lyrics! I look up to you! As I write poems and sometimes lyrics! I am glad I found you and I will watch you now :)
-wolf
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
When I was first led to Madame Madrigal's cover, I was absolutely heartfelt that someone took such great time and effort to make such a masterpiece over fairly silly lyrics I made. I'm very glad that she made the cover, too, because she motivated me to make more lyrics sheets... I really need to get to work on some more, rather than be a lazy clod that I am right now!

All I can say to you about writing lyrics is try to follow the rhythm. If there's anything I've learned from writing lyrics, is that if you can sing along to the lyrics in rhythm, then they might be just the right lyrics you're looking for. But also be warned that the right ones may already be used, that's one of the biggest risks.

It's a pleasure to have you watching me, I shall proceed to do the same. Thank you so much for your time!
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Wolfie-Void Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg thank you for watching me I write poems myself :3 I might work up to lyric level soon! :) it's such an honour your watching me >w< I love your work so much!!! I hope you enjoy my content!
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Redz-LEL Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
NO.
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
MAYBE.
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undertrash024 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2016
can  i please do a cover of this? i'll be sure to credit you in the vid
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course! Be sure to Note the final result to me too, I'd love to see it!
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WolfMaster221 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2016
Ok so umm... I already did a cover and u saw it, but I did another with a different background track because I think the first one didn't sound the best but i don't know if this one's any better.. Here it is youtu.be/FKaStSGveCE
Also if you wondered if it was possible to put these lyrics into a song more than three minutes or so long then this video is how.
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WolfMaster221 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2016
Ok so umm... I already did a cover and u saw it, but I did another with a different background track because I think the first one didn't sound the best but i don't know if this one's any better.. Here it is youtu.be/FKaStSGveCE
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
To be completely blunt, I actually think the first one was done far better. The buildup was good, don't get me wrong, but I guess the timing of it was... I dunno... a bit sloppy? It was definitely worth the second try, so thank you for contributing once again!
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TotalOtaku8 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
is it ok if I use this in a cover video? These lyrics almost brought me to tears and they're the best I've ever seen!!
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm surprised I managed to bring you to tears, truly! But nevertheless, do feel free to use the lyrics so long as you provide credit and link me to the final product!
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Deathot Featured By Owner Edited Jul 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Just amazing!
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, partner!
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Sans-Skeleton-52 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I sang this as I read it
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That's the whole point of lyrics, am I right? =P
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Sans-Skeleton-52 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes u r
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WolfMaster221 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016
I DID A THING
Here ya go, an attempted cover with poor audio quality.
Hope u enjoy!
m.youtube.com/watch?v=IxBXKSzN…
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
The audio quality wasn't all too bad, I will be completely truthful, even with how your voice was sort of quiet. However, I really enjoyed listening to this piece, especially with how your voice honestly sounds like Asriel himself was singing it.

Admittedly, reflecting back on the lyrics, I had realized that my lyrics were completely inaccurate to the actual story. BUT... He's "Just a Dreemurr", am I right? =P
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WolfMaster221 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2016
I was noticing how the lyrics didn't quite relate to the story but they were still amazing! I'm glad you liked my cover. :)
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Torians-Account Featured By Owner May 27, 2016
Asriel......... The feels......
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It gets you right there.
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DerRotenNachte Featured By Owner May 12, 2016
Striped shirts weren't around a thousand years ago..... :3
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe not in this world. c:
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DerRotenNachte Featured By Owner May 16, 2016
Or cameras.
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MountainSprite Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I did a cover of this, and I was wondering if you would allow me to post it to my Soundcloud and possibly YouTube? The lyrics are simply phenomenal, and I couldn't pass up the opportunity to try singing it! Full lyric credit would go to you, and the only thing I will own is my voice. X3 Pretty please with a cherry on top?
FriskLA Gay Lizard Scream Too 
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're absolutely welcome to put on a cover on YouTube, for certain. As for SoundCloud, eh... I'd like the cover spreading to start off small. So that people can give me feedback so that I know what I have to do to make more.
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MountainSprite Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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Dannyman12 Featured By Owner May 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Many thanks! Edits have been made and the comment has been posted!
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