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Broken

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This isn’t a happy poem, or an inspiring
This is a poem about a feeling that’s engulfing me
Snuffling the flame that burns within my heart, my soul
A flame that once burnt so brightly it could light up the sky
But now only smoulders remain as a reminder of the past
A pathetic smoulder of something which used to be me
Back when my spirit was unbroken and whole
This broken piece of a puzzle I have become
A missing piece that can never be found
For it has been forever lost to the past
Irretrievable, irreplaceable.

Lying here in pieces on the floor.

My heart beats, but I do not feel.

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Model: me
Photo: me

Featured: [link] by :iconarya-dwipangga:
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Image size
2044x2684px 2.83 MB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
u1030SW,S1030SW
Shutter Speed
1/25 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
800
Date Taken
Sep 8, 2008, 2:26:28 PM
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lonely-solitude's avatar
The fetal position along with the anguish and fear on her face shows a moment in time where there seems no escape is possible.
clairedarko's avatar
Omg, this is sad, but I love it ;-;
Ashythekitteh's avatar
i know how u feal :(
BerryAntoinette's avatar
woow!
very imprsiv O______O
ziegzag's avatar
add me pleasee [link] i am newbie :D
xxXXGH0STXXxx's avatar
I'd hug her real Tight! if she do that. No one deserves that kind of pain.
OrdosRussian72's avatar
love is pain...
now look at me - 5 tryings of suicide
kawaii-pupu-90's avatar
I think this photo is absolutely fantastic. There is a lot of feelings in it.
Labradorlove's avatar
Very good work :O Can't look at it without feeling ur pain... XD
PixelPandaa's avatar
i dont like this
ghujik's avatar
its almost as if you've died but its great altogether
This absolutly one of the most amazing expression of sadness and despair
kudos
you are so sad......... hug give
projectNOBLE's avatar
babe i love this..i can see how hurt ur expressions were.
Taikxo's avatar
T~T I know how you feel hun.....
I have that feeling right now... I hope things have improved for you... 'cuz things are not looking too good for me.........
:3 It was an awesome poem btw.
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heartpoised's avatar
oh god.. i love it!
CondadoCngresO's avatar
i love this pic!! it was like me yesterday hehe...
simply awesome!!
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