Hey, I think I'll change the map of Lord of Element. So if you want to help me with some idea, your will be welcome ^^

ENG: The first contact between humans and hexelioons took place in the year 4410, which marked the beginning of the second era of the second age. The first human ships docked on the island of the Twins, south of the continent of the Plant, rebuilt "island of the new being" a few years later. Five boats docked on the island early in the morning, when Icar (the first sun) rose, Captain Alan Nuevos, accompanied by his fleet of 200 sailors, proudly planted the flag of the human kingdom on the beach. It was not until the next day, after the settlers had settled their encampments, that the first contact started.They were hunter of Plante's Hé

Here is the first page (unfinished) of my comics, I take some time on Wednesday afternoon with a comic book writer who is also a teacher in the school where I want to go after the Bac. There are still a lot of things to finish this page (inking, shadows, colors etc ..) but I just want to know what you think of this first impression ^^ Thanks for yours comments ^^