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You can see me? by DamaiMikaz You can see me? by DamaiMikaz
"You're taking me to him, right?" Moriz asked when they'd passed the lab and entered the mostly deserted hallway that led to the north wing. Moriz still remembered the route. On the left was a small kitchen with a coffee machine and a fridge. Ahead was the double door that led to the north wing.
"Yes," Vasiliev answered. He paused for a moment and raised an eyebrow. "How so?"
"It's nothing," Moriz smiled. "I've just been mistaken about the layout."
Though Moriz was very sure his memory was accurate. There was activity elsewhere. He felt it, just like he felt that the shadow still followed them. It observed them from a distance, both curious but hungry at the same time.
"Hey" a small voice sounded. Moriz felt a cold breeze on his face. Something pulled his coat. He turned around to look straight into the face of a little boy with large dark eyes. The child was at least as surprised as he was. "You can see me?" he noted.
Moriz felt it slide over his skin, the feeling of electricity. It was cold, but at the same time it burned the thin hairs on his arms when it hit him. The air suddenly felt heavy, burning like fire. Moriz gasped. His mouth filled with the taste of metal. He swallowed.
"I'm scared," the child whispered, his narrow fingers clasped tightly around the fabric of Moriz's white coat. His pale skin was almost the same color as the fabric of his coat. The child glowed. Everything about him, not just his skin. His energy felt strange, distorted, incomplete.
"I want to go home" he whispered. "When can I go home?"
As soon as you get better, Moriz remembered his answer from last time. The same answer as he always gave the children at the hospital to calm them down. Those same words lay on his lips again. A lie. He swallowed it.
"I don't know" he answered instead.
It was too intense, that feeling around his body, and the way that child stared at him. His stomach felt heavy. He felt like throwing up. The next moment something broke inside his head. The icy cold was broken by a warm feeling that found its way down to his chin. Red drops fell on his coat. And suddenly Vasiliev was there again.
"What's with you?" the neurologist asked, clearly worried.
"I --" Moriz wiped his hand under his nose. He felt light headed. "A nosebleed."
"Sheesh! You too?"


5178 was a dark year.
From my Emion (not so) short story called "5175"


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Moriz and Fourteen from my Emion project. 
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Moriz portrait by DamaiMikaz  ES01AAIL0014 by DamaiMikaz 
  

More from this project:
Encounter by DamaiMikaz  Mindscape by DamaiMikaz  Back when they were still close by DamaiMikaz  Certainly not drunk by DamaiMikaz 


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:iconlizdragon14:
Lizdragon14 Featured By Owner 18 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful! Omg, it's so good! 
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AlexaDream Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it. There's this looming feeling of sadness, confusion and loss. Maybe a hint of having given up, and dread.
And it's beautiful.
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner 2 days ago
This is very cool
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dragonrider Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Something that stands out about your work right away is the atmosphere, even from the mere thumbnails in my inbox. This particular image actually reminds me of a story a friend and I put together. The character I created was a child with supernatural ability who was being experimented on in a dystopian future hospital, so I felt an odd personal connection to this image right away. Definitely makes me intrigued about the story you have! :happybounce: 
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SheeJrainboH Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
are these from a game? 
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No. They're from an original project from mine
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Zaxckee Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
got the chills from the painting and excerpt, I think the tone was captured excellently
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :heart:
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DragonWriter664 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
Chilling. Beautifully written and illustrated! The atmosphere really surrounds you.
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :heart:
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I don't want to know yet, at the same time, I do. Gaaaahhhh!
Good snippet.
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay :D
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
And to think you're still writing that "short story" XD
If you can and you're enjoying it, why not :D
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well... yeah.
It started as "lets make this a short 2-chapter shot" and then it turned out to be 300+ pages.
Not like that's new to me, but still XD
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Why am I not surprised XD
This is, how many books ago did it all began? XDD
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A long time ago :lol:
I started the story because I wanted to explore a different setting with some different characters. But there's just so much lore XD
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I get you XD
Who needs Disney for a franchise, give me Emion!
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha. I'm glad you're such a fan
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vilemm Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Nice rip-off of Killua.
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aImsivi Featured By Owner 4 days ago
wow, i love this! very nice atmosphere. ♥
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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Katrinava Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely incredible, couldn't believe what I was seeing was real. Read the excerpt an wow... breathless.
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Couldn't believe it was real... in which way?
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:iconkatrinava:
Katrinava Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Didn't know such a good thing could exist, made by one person.... It's incredible
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha.
I just made a drawing, bro :lol:
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ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is it about some movie or something like this, or it is your original work?
(Just by the way though, do you believe...?)
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's an original work of mine. Original story too :)
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ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
About what is it, if I could know?
Do you believe in after-life and such?
I believe (& had some experiences).
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's about a group of rebels against a corrupt government. And this particular story is about a bunch of scientist researching a strange phenomenon. The kid isn't a ghost, though. He's still alive.
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ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Have you that story here as complete?
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nope. It's still being written and I write in my native language
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ADMA-DE-ROSENKREUZ Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my is slovak, i also write stories in my mother-language. could i know what speech is your native speech?
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dutch :)
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CMVreud Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Do you want some 'SCP' with a side of ghoststory and creepypasta?
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:icondamaimikaz:
DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what?
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Neelai Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Captivating mood! I can almost feel the cold myself Clap 
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! That means I did right :D
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SamanthaTorres12348 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Very nice drawing/painting
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Xennext Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student Artist
Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Science! Don't fail me now! Finding a way to touch the intangible and the unseen.
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
huh?
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brigetmiget Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
aww the poor little sweetheart!! i would hug him but i think my arms would go through him unless radioactive ghosts have a physical form? anyways amazing work!! 
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can actually touch him, though it would probably result in a nosebleed or radiation poisoning :lol:
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brigetmiget Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm then maybe a hug through a hazmat suit or two  :D
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