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Part I

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DallasHarder
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Description

Going to a be a 3 part series! I used the bumble & bumble spray chalk. I will be posting more now.
Image size
4530x6117px 12.46 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 7D
Shutter Speed
1/83 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Nov 29, 2013, 3:54:15 PM
Sensor Size
20mm
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FinniganRazbee
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

THe fact you off centered yourself helps the piece immensely, but it needs more interest. The lighting is soft which works but maybe having your shadow in the background would help. Or a splash of that beautiful color you have in your hair somewhere else on your torso. It's very serene and you look beautifully androgynous which is great. But it needs something to pull the eye through the piece and maybe add more interest. Maybe even taking the eye shadow you have and emphasizing other parts? On that note it is a beautiful portrait of you its very intimate.