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Raise your hand if you think I should draw the Barkeep and Cyril's P.O.V
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Well, alcohol lowers a woman's inhibitions. Super alcohol really lowers her inhibitions.

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Alrighty then let's get ourselves into some comic critiques here.

*Warning, any different opinion is welcomed as long as it's "troll free"*

Vision: It's rather limited being only 3 frames and background wise it's rather eye soaring.

On a plus side though the expressions and poses blend together really well and make up for it, but after a while they won't save you anymore.

Originality: The drunk lady/man running around saying wierd stuff is pretty old and it's been done quite a lot of times.

On it's own this strip would get 1 star at most but as a series it's backed up by many other original work and the context and dialogue add a personal touch.

Technique: Aaaah, gotta love your shading and colouring, all both delightfully merging together within the bounderies of your lineart.

Impact: Let's be honest here, story aside, slap an ass across a page and you're garanteed a high impact, just look at the DA front page there's always AT LEAST one ass standing out there.
I know I'll be remembering that ass for a few days.

All jokes aside also the dialogue stands out, it's rather unique and fresh, something I probabley won't read in any other comic, except for Cyril in the last frame, I am disapoint in you last frame Cyril.

Just keep in mind, more asses and wierder surreal stuff make the impact score high, always give the audience something they'd never imagine seeing.

Like a pink baboon with blue butt cheeks tap dancing on the Empire State Building while singing the classics of Frank Sinatra backwards with a banjo.

Now THAT'S just gotta leave an impact to the viewer when drawn on paper.
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their are NO misteaks

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Why is the woman naked?
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Meh hand is'a raise'n :meow:
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i raise mah hand
Teshyr-Menessi's avatar
If my OC Phanto-Mime was in this scene, his monacle and gloves would fall to the ground
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That is a happy accident.:D Do you draw requests?
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it depends on the request and if I have time
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Well for the time thing, you can take as much time as you would need. As for what it is, can you do a comic version of a story I wrote? [link]
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MistressoftheRoses's avatar
*raises hand* woohoo!
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LOL this is hilarious. XD
*raise hand*
however im assuming itll be a flip of what we already got
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Would be interesting...

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*raises 3 hands*
Filecreation's avatar
-raises hand- :l
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Lol. This is one of my favorites. Not so much for the nakedness, but the timing.
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