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Can anyone give me any advice about my art and stuff? i wanna be able to improve so dont just say " aw naw ur good fam " i want you to just tell me whats wrong ;00; (trust me it wont make me angry it will make me happy xD) so even if its a small thing plEASE tell me fghj

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:iconphasmaphobiic:
phasmaphobiic Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your general style tbh. You have good linework, good anatomy too ! The way you color looks nice, and I like the facial expressions. The shading is the only big thing I could suggest improving honestly, not even that is looks bad, it's just really dark. Also sometimes the fur tufts look somewhat(??) out of place, but not too often.
Example, the fur on the tail here. Some of the fur looks kinda squished together. Or in this one, the ears are pretty tall honestly, unless it's supposed to be that way ;v;
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That's all I have tbh, I hope it helped somewhat?? I'm not good at critiquing, hhaha.
Don't discourage yourself though, you have a lovely style, and I always look forward to seeing your artwork ! Keep up the good work <3
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Cylynix Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you first of all < 333
And yes ive always had a small problem with the way i draw fur ;00;
Whenever im drawing fur i always try to make sure it looks super fluffy
(cuz thats just a part of my style) so i often dont think of how it looks fully </3
And as for the ears on the second one thats also a style thing ;00; The way they
flop is a style thing but i will say they do get p big xD
Thank you for the advice < 333333
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:iconphasmaphobiic:
phasmaphobiic Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime m'dude ! ;o; I'm glad I could help ;0

And honestly, the ears and fur don't even look too bad tbh?? I was just looking for things that might help, so I wasn't just mentioning the shading like everyone else x'D
Also, I understand the floof thing, I struggle with that a lot as well ;n; And I like the floppy ears, it looks good on your art <3
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Cylynix Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still thank you! I need to learn to improve at some point anyway xD
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:iconphasmaphobiic:
phasmaphobiic Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Either way, your style is still great :'00
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:iconci0ver:
CI0ver Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm you could try making the shading a bit clearer so the markings and initial colors are more noticeable
And maybe a bit of soft shading would be nice
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Cylynix Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah yea ive been trying to improve my shading (as you can see from the polls xD)
And ye ima try some soft shading again and maybe make it look better then before ;00;
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CI0ver Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea xD

And also you could try and be more careful while lining (keeping a stroke consistence and size) and avoid wobbly lines
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Cylynix Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yes my lines are better with my whale canvas size now and i try my best to
keep them as great as possible but because of my set up at home i often hit my elbow
on my desk so that can make my lines a lil wobbly -n- rip me xD
But yea ill work on that too ;00;
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:iconci0ver:
CI0ver Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha 
Good luck!
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Cylynix Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ill need it xD
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