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Moon Light

We strole along, under moon light,
both hand-in-hand, and heart-to-heart
Side by side with simple delight,
hoping never to have to part.
I hold you close with all my might,
knowing you are my counterpart.
By the moon, so lovely and bright,
I see you as a work of art.
You are such a beautiful sight.
My eyes focus, and cannot dart.
You have left me breathless tonight,
though I had felt so from the start.
I kiss your hand, just like a knight,
Realizing we won't stray apart.
We fall in love ...by the moon light!
An old romantic poem I wrote. A fairly short and simple poem, but very romantic and it rhymes quite eloquently I think. Meant to be pictured with a couple out by a gazebo next to lake on a night with the moon shining brightly.
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cooper Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2002
Lovely, wonderous.... :) (Smile) so romantic.... keep up the lovely thoughts, take care

@Coop@
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babysista Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2001
beautiful flow of words. nice rhyming. it's very sweet =) (Smile) aawwww.....

........................... Bug
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btrsweet Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2001
aww.. :D (Big Grin) beautifully captured in words..

now i want to go for a moonlight stroll w/ my boyfriend.. :) (Smile)

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sanguru Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2001  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice flow you got here red. The rhyming is so well done. It's a very sweet poem. To fall in love on a long stroll by moonlight would be great, the the whole mood of it. You capture it so well, I just love this Red. Keep up the good work.

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somnambulist Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2001
Interesting. The rhyme seems to add something to the poem, though I can't sense what.

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emoticon Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2001

Simply great. Reads like a heart of true lover. :) (Smile)
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-tank Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001
awesome poem, while reading it and pictuing the image u said, it just makes you feel better about life...great job
-tank
-=don't fear to imagine=-
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doomed Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001
ah hah! cool poem

s.d.i.w.l.w.y.mich....
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