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Don't


Don't want


Don't want to


Don't... Don't... Don't...


Don't want to


Don't want


Don't want to


Don't want to hit


......to hit


...hit


Don't want


Don't want to hit car


sleep...


......crash.
To some this will be serious, others funny. I guess it's both.... oh just go read it. "J
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redlily Featured By Owner May 29, 2002
simple...sounds like either humorous, or insanity...or both? i like it bunches. i read it for the title...i'm word obsessive...and, yeah. i liked it. i still do >.O
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pmq Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2001
Nice and personal. It's great !
PMQ.
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Clair Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2001
You are such an interesting person. Another very original poem you have written here. I dont find it funny but I'm sure others might. It's great...i cant think of words to explain it lol :-) (Smile) great
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babysista Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2001
teehee.... =D (Big Grin) i found it weally funny...

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sanguru Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001  Hobbyist Writer
Not really funny as it is intriging. I love it. very nicely done. Just so much of you goes into these poems, I love them. Keep up the great work, this is amazing.

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