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Anothers Words

Your words do haunt me.
Not of shock
but similarity.
I read eagerly,
as if locked
and without a key.

Odd, but all to true.
so further,
Intrigued, I pursue.
Through poems you do,
put together,
I start to know you.

At times word for word,
so many similarities.
...thus you haunt me.
This one was inspired by the people who's poetry I truely love and connect to. It's strange and haunting how similare we poets can be. This was written before Deviant Art hit the net, but seems reinspired by people like Valkyrie, SanGuru, BlueNine, Jsenn, Ryoko, ShutupJuice, BabySista, and so many others here. It's just a little poem, but I hope you enjoy it as much as I have enjoyed yours.
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babysista Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2001
wow. spooky. ah well... they say great minds think alike. =D (Big Grin) i love, absolutely love the flow of this one. i love the rhyming and the meter. it's short, sweet and intoxicating. and i'm not just saying that cause my name's there.
btw... heyyy!! shutupjuice is before me! *sulk* must poke her in school The Devil well anyway... Thumbs Up

........................... Bug
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dawgpoop Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2001
I must be the so many other people.. heheheh. great poem

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cuttheredwire Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001
Ugg....

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sanguru Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001  Hobbyist Writer
You just changed it. =[

Rarr. oh well... I'm not first! :P (Razz)

hehe, complain complain. =) (Smile)

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cuttheredwire Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001
You silly head. I could never forget you. Look:

"people like Valkyrie, SanGuru"

You are right there buddy girl. :) (Smile) I could never ever forget you. You and Valkyrie are the reasons I post. You two care the most, and are always first to comment on me. I remeber when I used to have wait weeks for a comment. Thanks to you, it take minutes! That mean so much to me.

I could never forget you. :) (Smile)

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sanguru Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2001  Hobbyist Writer
=( (Sad) You forgot me...

Very nice poem though. It really clicks. I love the context of it and how it involves all of us. The poem just moves like all of us have, in such a fluid motion it's amazing. keep up the good work hun. (still can't believe you left me off =[)

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