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Sister Sister-CH 1- 01

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The next few updates may be skipped or delayed due to vacations and such, but due to weather, some vacations may be delayed and updates will be posted on time. I'm back from Colossalcon yay! That was a blast! I met so many great people! I'm hoping to get an artist ally table next year to sell buttons and prints of Sister Sister! ^^

Other places to find Sister Sister (the main site is the one linked above)

The Duck webcomics
Tumblr <--this is also the character ask blog!
Weasyl
Furaffinity


This comic is rated 17+ for violence, blood, gore and some foul language!



Brief synopsis


A young dragon named Bo, must face a great challenge to end a centuries old war between two gods that has left his clan in ruin. With the help of the guardian dragons, a mail dragon named Blue Eyes and the great dragon god of light, Bo must protect his adopted sister, who may hold the key to ending the war once and for all.

If you read the old pages before, please don't spoil anything to new readers! Your comments will be hidden!



*Edits*
1.) Fixed a typo in panel 2! Thanks for catching that!
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deathflaky's avatar
What did I notice? No peace at allXD!! Even among those dragons:)
yeah if you sky wing aren't useful, then there is no need to exist in the world anymore.
CrazyKittyProduction's avatar
uHHHN I REALLY WANNA MAKE AN OC BUT MY DRAGONS WILL ENVER AMOUINT TO THE CREATIVITY OF THIS STORY
CrystalCircle's avatar
Go for it dude! :D I totally want to see what you come up with ^^
CrazyKittyProduction's avatar
yassss im gonna do it

*stares at blank page for six hours* (jk IMA DO IT FOR THE VINE)
CrystalCircle's avatar
You can do it Crazy! I belive in you!
CrazyKittyProduction's avatar
aLRIGHT IMA DO IT FOR THE VINE IT'S GONNA BE SO GOOD
BirdGVee's avatar
I'm really getting into the story, this is getting better and better. Love how you gave the "slave" dragons clamps for their wings. I think they could use a tiny bit more detail next time they are close up.

Do you mind me pointing out a typo? It's in panel 2. :)


- If you don't want me giving constructive critique, just tell me, I'll shut up :3 You can hide my comment then. I know some artists don't like that. But understand me: I just want to help. :)
CrystalCircle's avatar
Oh yes please let me know of typos! I'm planning on selling hard copies of this comic soon so any catches on typos and grammar are really, really appreciated! I'm a terrible speller and rely on a proofreading software to check for typos and grammar issues, but sometimes it misses things...I can't seem to find what you are talking about in panel 2 though XD

I actually do like constructive criticism so you are welcome to point things out to me. I won't be offended at all ^^ I find constructive critiques a great way to improve!

Thank you so much for asking about it! I know some people don't take critiques well even if they are helpful ones.
BirdGVee's avatar
:w00t:

Okay, the typo is: You wrote "It was said the the place was beautiful once..."

That's supposed to be "that the place..."
CrystalCircle's avatar
Oh thank you very much! How the heck did I miss that...I'm wondering how my proof reader missed it. It usually catches double words :p I'll fix it now!
RusCSI's avatar
I remember cringing at these restraints even in the old version as it looks painful and probably breaks/damages the wings, thus rendering the sky wings flightless even if they get rid of it.
CrystalCircle's avatar
Yeah pretty much :( The fire wings mad them so even if the sky wings break free, their wings would be too weak to enable flight...or use their abilities to control wind.
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Hop on on the hype train!
savrin330's avatar
Awesome page!! You did a really great job!
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savrin330's avatar
You're welcome :)
FireballStardraco's avatar
Fantastic work on this one, you really did this brilliantly.
CrystalCircle's avatar
Thanks so much! :hug:
MinrDJ's avatar
OOOOOOOO, can't wait!
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