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Doll's House page1 by croovman Doll's House page1 by croovman
READ RIGHT TO LEFT, PLEASE

A few months ago our awesome literature teacher gave us an artistic assignment based on the excellent play - 'Doll's House' by Henrik Ibsen (1828-1906). I really liked the idea and decided to do a comic out of the two last pages of the book that turned out to be three pages of comics. Took four, full days to finish. I really worked hard to hand it in on time, but it was worth it. I needed a good grade, and I learned tons about doing comics. I've learned since then as well, but I'm still really proud of this, it's probably my first, most proffesional comic.
My teacher really liked it so I let her keep the original pages, but I scanned them, and here they are.
only the first one is fully pencilled, inked and colored like I wanted, I didn't have time for the rest, plus the brown charcoal I used for the backround was awful to work with.
As soon as I finish translating the next page I will submit it.
Enjoy :)

-Stav
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-Page 1-

Panel#1-
Nora: "That's it - take your ring back. Give me mine."
Panel#2-
Helmer: "That, too?"
Panel#3-
Nora: "That, too."
Panel#4-
Helmer: "Take it."
Panel#7-
Nora: "Good. Well, we're done."
Panel#8-
Nora: "The keys I leave here. The maids know their way around the house works much better than I do. Christina will pass through here after I will ride away from the city, to pack all the things that still belong to me from the house. I would like my belongings to be sent to me."
Panel#9-
Helmer: "Over?! It's all over?! Wouldn't you ever think of me, Nora?"
Panel#10-
Nora: "I'm sure I'll be thinking about you often, about you and about the kids and this house."
Panel#11-
Helmer: "Am I allowed to write you, Nora?"
Panel#12-
Nora: "No... Never."
Panel#13-
Nora: "Don't you do it, you hear?"
Panel#14-
Helmer: "But let me send you..."
Nora: "Nothing, nothing."
Panel#15-
Helmer: "Or help you when you need something."
Nora: "No, I've told you."
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:iconmintyfreshbrain:
mintyfreshbrain Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2007  Student
I love this! The brown charcoal is excellent; it provides contrast.
:)
:+fav:
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:iconcroovman:
croovman Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Student General Artist
hey thanks :]
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:iconparamitepie:
ParamitePie Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005
I really love these dude,
A really great comic it is!
When did she give it back to you?
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:iconcroovman:
croovman Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005  Student General Artist
thanks! and she didn't, I scanned them before I gave them to her.
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:iconparamitepie:
ParamitePie Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005
:lmao:
Funny fun fun. I guess I'm gonna miss Inbal.
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:iconcroovman:
croovman Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005  Student General Artist
yeah, she's cool
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:iconparamitepie:
ParamitePie Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005
A bit of a Fakatza, but she's cool.
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:iconcroovman:
croovman Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005  Student General Artist
nah, she's too unique
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:iconruzkin:
ruzkin Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2005
Hey Croov! Nice work on both pages so far, I remember studying this book in year 12 (translated, of course), it was one of my faves as well.
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:iconcroovman:
croovman Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2005  Student General Artist
yeah, I really like it. thanks for the comment, Ruz! :)
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