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My red screams of satiric deception;
Your red burns of false omniscience;
Untangled, we approach carnal collision.
Our black sings of lustful silence.
RED
08.25.2010

Scribbled while studying for my exam and spacing out at KFC. *sigh* :|
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Hopeful-Rogue Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Professional Photographer
Very unique
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
thanks! :)
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Hopeful-Rogue Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010  Professional Photographer
My pleasure
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FrkHilde Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
I wish I could write like this. I wish I could write like this when I'm concentrating hard, conjuring every muse in existence. I love this. :heart:
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
oh, thank you, thank you, and thank you again! :) :meow:
and you could, you could! :D
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FrkHilde Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
Very welcome! :D
Oh, I don't know :D ...but thanks for your confidence in me. :)
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
no problem. :glomp: :D
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dirtyprettythin Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this, it's got that abstractness you always seem to find when you're half distracted and really shouldn't be writing poetry. Likey Likey!
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
sometimes i write better when i shouldn't be writing. :D:D
and thank you very much btw. :hug: :)
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irfan-ali-baloch Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010
it's good
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
thanks! :)
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CountofMC Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010   Traditional Artist
Powerful stuff...especially during study time.
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
it's a good way to rest the mind. :D and thank you! :hug:
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vanhelsingfreak2 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
awesome good job this is like the maybe fifth short one i read today
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
thank you! :D
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vanhelsingfreak2 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
ur welcome and kfc is awesome!!!! they have the most delicous chicken besides the kind that my dad makes! XD
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
hha. you're absolutely right! can't help eating a lot when i'm there. :D:D
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vanhelsingfreak2 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
yea have u watched the movie coraline?
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
yep. and i like it. :)
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vanhelsingfreak2 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
yea u remember the part where the old ladies are like pratically naked in the theater? i asked my boyfriend if he wanted to see something disturbing and i turned on coraline and it was at that part! XD he was so disturbing!
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
oh yeah.i was disturbed myself! it was kinda creepy. :D:D oh the kids who watched that movie!
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010   Writer
Very good work for a quick write up :)
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
thank you! :)
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010   Writer
You're welcome :)
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010   Writer
:)
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cooki-la Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
Whoa. Never quite read something like this before.
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
:D what do you mean?
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cooki-la Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
I dunno, this poem has a different feel to it than the stuff I usually read on DA. :meow: Very nice. Sorry if that came off like a bad thing. X3
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:iconcrookedbitterfingers:
oh.thank you then. :D

and i didn't take it as a bad thing. no worries. :)
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