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Death Of Poetry 007
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five years ago we went with my family to the movie theater
and didn't sit with them, but that didn't mean I wanted
your tongue down my throat in the same room that contained
the person who dictated my life completely .
Kissing you gave me butterflies, a rapid pulse,
and this awful, sick feeling in the pit of my stomach.
Five years later kissing means nothing, or really, it means too many things
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it means you are doing more promiscuous things--
but it doesn't mean you care for someone
or even that you have any particular desire to be kissing them.
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  • Listening to: lets eat grandma
  • Reading: house on mango st.
  • Watching: leave no trace
  • Playing: hellabroke from my vw trunk
  • Eating: vegan meatballs!
  • Drinking: ice cold tap water
will be taking august "off" from this dA forum

....if you don't like the poetry you see in dA,

I plead that you write some yourself.

...and don't let anyone build any walls without your permission.

K?

K!


love, crit
  • Listening to: lets eat grandma
  • Reading: house on mango st.
  • Watching: leave no trace
  • Playing: hellabroke from my vw trunk
  • Eating: vegan meatballs!
  • Drinking: ice cold tap water
will be taking august "off" from this dA forum

....if you don't like the poetry you see in dA,

I plead that you write some yourself.

...and don't let anyone build any walls without your permission.

K?

K!


love, crit

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Colonel Pannik
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
United States
Current Residence: mostly above it all
Favourite genre of music: songs that make me think
Operating System: redhat
Personal Quote: the system only dreams in total darkness
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:iconimperfect:
imperfect Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I don't want to start any blasphemous rumours.
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critmass Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
hell
whats a BR among friends
but a simple
flick on the forehead
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critmass Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i really do want to be a poet
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LarkinSkye Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You're one of the most interesting writers I have ever had the pleasure of reading. 
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critmass Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure if interesting describes my prose, but i appreciate your words
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critmass Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
while carving the early morning streets with french tyred speed, I bagan to gently weep from the lyrics I heard. imagining it was a wedding dance I whispered in your ear that even though i acknowledged the sacrosanctity of bonds, i thought that you should keep the car running.
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critmass Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
my hands dont like to critique
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critmass Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
may your peaks always stiffen and your yeast remain live
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SaimGraphics Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why don't they added you as a Senior Member, even after staying 9 Years???? :) :D
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