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:new: I totally forgot to mention! pixiepot made us a shiny new group avatar! Please go shower her in love. :heart:

It seems that a one week submission period is simply not enough time for the group to get a good number of submissions and also a good number of comments each week. I understand because even I am having a tough time keeping up with everything! :) So, I've changed the guidelines to reflect our new 2-week schedule. Submissions will be open a total of ten days, or until we reach 25 pieces. Comments will be open 14 days. I think this will work out better for everyone involved. Please let me know what you think!


How This Works


:pointr: If you wish to submit work:

:bulletblue: First, read our guidelines. Any submission that does not adhere to the guidelines will be rejected.
:bulletblue: If you have Poetry that you feel is ready for critique, submit it to our Featured Gallery. Your request will be reviewed within 48 hours. Remember, the submission cut-off is Saturday, March 17th so get your work in quickly!
:bulletblue: Comment on another piece in the featured gallery within three days of your submission and leave a direct link to your comment in this blog. (FAQ #14: How do I create a link to a specific comment?)

:pointr: If you wish to be entered in the points drawing:

:bulletblue: First, read our guidelines.
:bulletblue: Comment on as many pieces in our Featured Gallery as you wish.
:bulletblue: Leave a link to each comment in this blog. (FAQ #14: How do I create a link to a specific comment?) You may leave multiple links in a single comment.
:bulletblue: If you submitted to the featured gallery this week your first comment does NOT count toward the points drawing. You must make and link to at least one other to be entered in the drawing.


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Project Educate: Visual and Concrete PoetryAs a part of projecteducate, the literature gallery moderators will be posting news articles regarding the literature community and gallery here on deviantART as well as literature in general, covering various topics that we feel deserve more exposure. This article will go over two rather misunderstood genres of poetry here on dA: visual and concrete.
Visual Poetry
Visual poetry is a genre of poetry where the poem itself is placed within an image (or is functioning as part of the image), helping to strengthen the value and meaning of both the image and the poem itself. A common misconception of visual poetry is that any poem can be placed on any image and that makes the work visual poetry. However, the main strength of a good visual poem is that interaction of the image and the text, where one is reliant on the other in order to function best.

Another use of the visual poetry galleries here on deviantART that users have really jum
Olfactory Poetry: A Definitive EssayThe sense of smell is often neglected in literature. The problem lies in the limits of words, at least in English. The words used to describe smell are poor and vague, even when relying on synaesthesia and the inclusion of other senses. The difficulty in expressing an experience of smell result in descriptions related to the sense being indirect and indefinite, the inclusion of them merely for symbolism or the suggestion of a mood.
The main problem lies in that we cannot adequately create an impression of smells. The term 'imagery' reflects our basic tendency to visualize everything we see.
But I want to focus on olfactory poetry, or rather, the fact that there is none. There are examples of poetry that deal with the other senses: visual poetry that evokes sight; sound poetry that deals with hearing; haptic poetry that attempts touch; there's no gustatory poetry yet, but I imagine that its development will be linked with olfactory poetry. The experiences of smell and taste are closely
Haiku Theory Part 1 -2009-A Lot of Words About A Little Poem
An Introduction to Haiku Structures
Part 1
-Introduction-
A haiku poem cannot be defined according to the number of syllables and lines it contains (nor by the number of syllables in each line). Although I do not wish to go into the reasons why at this point (I will save that for a later discussion) the form of modern English haiku, as Haruo Shirane writes, “is a short poem, usually written in one to three lines.” (in Gilbert, 2009)  At this point our definition sounds very vague. If the number of syllables and lines do not define a haiku poem, then what does? And if a haiku poem is simply a short one, two or three-line poem then what separates it from other forms of Western short-verse or, in the case of one-line haiku, a sentence?
Patricia Donegan writes, in agreement with the Western haiku community at large, that “syllable counting... is not the important thing for haiku in English. Haiku is an experience, not an act of co
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Critiquing Themes in LitCRITIQUING THEMES AND MEANING IN LITERATURE
By M. Alice Chown
If you were a caveperson gazing up at the night sky, you'd search the stars and the blackness between for a meaning.  The constellations, which are based on myths handed down by the ancient Greeks, stand as examples of our innate desire to find a message in a medium.
It's human nature to seek meaning.  Our brains naturally fill in missing information to perceive order and sense even where none may exist.  Likewise, during the act of reading, our brains try to find meaning beyond that which is expressed by the individual words.  It's difficult to read the following without mentally imbuing the neologisms with meaning:   
"'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe."
--First stanza of the nonsense poem, "Jabberwocky", from "Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found There", 1872, by Le
Poetry AnalysisI wanted to study English Lit without learning pages of notes by heart. I decided that the appreciation of Wordsworth was a necessary part of my education. I heard that by reading poetry I could improve my own poetry. Typing 'colon-doubleyou-oh-doubleyou-colon' whenever one of my favourite poets on deviantART put up new work seemed unoriginal. I thought it would be cool to be one of those smart people who read poetry for fun.
Perhaps you can relate to some of those situations. Perhaps you're wondering why those five statements belong in the same paragraph. Those five sentences describe a few non-fatal problems that can be solved by learning to analyse poetry. I would've included a fatal problem if I could think of one, but poetry analysis doesn't seem to be that high on anybody's list of priorities.
The first thing you need to do is to make sure you know why you're analysing whichever poem you've chosen to analyse. If you're writing a critique, you need to be aware of flaws in the poem
The Critic's Toolkit: LitThe Critic's Toolkit: Literature Edition
Introduction
Critique, the examination or analysis of a work of art (in our case, a written work of course), can be an enjoyable, educational experience for both the critic and the author.  If that sounds like something a teacher would say to you about a subject that makes you alternately fall asleep or want to throw up, don't despair, because it can actually be a great experience.  You just need some tools to help you.
Technical
The main component to many critiques of beginner's work tends to be technical.  This can be as basic as misspellings and punctuation errors, which can be an easy thing for you to put in your critique in order to give it more substance, but the technical aspect can also take on a wider scope.  Technical critique can examine sentence structure in terms of general readability and how clearly an idea is portrayed, to even the metaphoric and the way imagery was used.
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If you know of more great guides to poetry or critique, submit them to our favorites gallery!

Happy critiquing!
:heart: Lili
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:iconmauriciokanno:
MauricioKanno Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
next topic? eheh
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I'm waiting on that one too. Kneeling-Glory?
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tokiofalloutgirl Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Writer
I did one :P
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Got it :)
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, I'm not sure if I should put myself in the draw or let someone else do it in the admin section but:

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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I got it! :giggle:
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! And I got one more: [link] The one I left on your work. What were your thoughts on that by the way?

For future reference should I just add myself into the draws or get someone else to do it?
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Would you believe I've actually been totally flooded with helpful comments and critiques this passed week that I'm overwhelmed! So I've decided I'll give each critique it's due consideration and a reply comment this weekend when I'll have more time than just 15mins on a computer here and there.

As for putting yourself on the draws? Why not? If you're unsure it's always something that *Kneeling-Glory and I can check for you later :)
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, fair enough. Cool thanks
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Another two critiques for Poetry from me:
Playing marbles by *MauricioKanno
Strawberries by ~XOGlidehWingethXO
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CJWilde Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Writer
I have critiqued the next two entries to the folder, following my previous five:

:pointr: Playing marbles by *MauricioKanno: [link]
:pointr: strawberries by ~XOGlidehWingethXO: [link]

I hope that more people submit their work over the weekend, so I will have more to critique. :aww:
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MauricioKanno Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hi there!

Iīve just critiqued "My Wonderland.", work by ~Dreams-Of-Lightning.

Itīs here: [link]
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:iconcharlene-art:
Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It is noted :)
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:iconmauriciokanno:
MauricioKanno Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
hi there!

my opinion about the new icon:

i think itīs very interesting and cute, but the other had much more contrast, so it was better to see and read before. now itīs a bit difficult to understand the name of the group at a first glance.

maybe darker contours and shading would make it better, because its color is pretty much the same of the dA background.
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with this statement
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Two more comments for Poetry:
My Wonderland by ~Dreams-Of-Lightning
Chagrin by ~M3iik
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student General Artist
So, I've changed the guidelines to reflect our new 2-week schedule. Submissions will be open a total of ten days, or until we reach 25 pieces. Comments will be open 14 days.

Just to clarify the open comment period, is that 14 days FROM the end of the 10 day submission deadline or 14 days from when the Journal is posted for the next medium?

So for this fortnight do the dates would look like this:
Submission from the 10th - 17th and Comments open from the 10th - 31st?
or
Submission from the 10th - 17th and Comments open from the 10th - 24th?
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student General Artist
For the dates I meant:
Submission from the 7th - 17th and Comments open from the 7th - 31st
or
Submission from the 7th - 17th and Comments open from the 7th - 20th


Sorries! :phew:
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:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Submissions from the 7th - 17th, comments from 7th - 20th. ;)
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M3iik Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My critique on 'A Lover Torn' by =CJWilde [link]
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Marked! Thank you. :heart:
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:iconcjwilde:
CJWilde Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Firstly, I adore the new icon! =pixiepot has done an amazing job. I do love her pixel art. As I have submitted a piece to the gallery, and for the points drawing, here are links to my critiques (on all pieces in the gallery, so far. I will continue to post more links as more people submit their work):

:pointr: Apprehend an Understanding by *ScarsofAngels: [link]
:pointr: Chagrin by ~M3iik: [link]
:pointr: How Vast It Is by *xlntwtch: [link]
:pointr: My Wonderland by ~Dreams-Of-Lightning: [link]
:pointr: Rumour Has It by ~tokiofalloutgirl: [link]

Also, thank you for both extending the week to a fortnight (it is a lot better, I think!) and for providing links to #lacoterie and #The-Writers-Review. I have joined them both and they are brilliant and such helpful groups, especially when it comes to finding new work to critique every week. :aww:
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
All marked! Thank you. :heart:

I'm glad you joined our affiliate groups. :D They're both wonderful.
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:iconcjwilde:
CJWilde Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Writer
I especially like #lacoterie. I think it is such a good idea to encourage participation in that way. :)
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:iconpixiepot:
pixiepot Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Professional Photographer
Thank you for mentioning me. :huggle:
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:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Of course! :heart:
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
This is *xlntwtch's comment: [link]
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:iconmissmorticia:
MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student General Artist
My comments for Poetry:
How Vast It Is by *xlntwtch
Rumor Has It by ~tokiofalloutgirl

If people submit more piece's to the gallery I'm sure there'll be more comments by me ;)
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Marked! Thanks hun. :heart:
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Dreams-Of-Lightning Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Hello there, I hope I am putting this in the right place. Here is my critique/feedback for this week:

On Rumor Has It by tokiofalloutgirl: [link]

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:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Marked! Thank you. :heart:
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student General Artist
~Dreams-Of-Lightning something for next time, add in the group icon so that *Kneeling-Glory can easily find and confirm that you have completed your required comment if you submitted to the gallery that week, also it's nice for the author/artist to be able to see that they are getting comments from the group as well.

: iconcritique-it : - without the spaces, will add in the groups icon to your comments in future.
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Dreams-Of-Lightning Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Ah sorry, still learning. Thanks for letting me know! I will do so in future =) x
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student General Artist
:huggle:
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I see we've changed the icon. Didn't recognise it for a moment there :P
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:iconmissmorticia:
MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student General Artist
I know! ~Charmed-Ravenclaw I saw it this morning and did a little double take with a few "What the fuck's" thrown in! Lol.
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Charlene-Art Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Sorry! I forgot to let people know about that. xD =pixiepot made it for us! :D
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:iconmissmorticia:
MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student General Artist
It's lovely! I like it, just threw me a bit this morning when I saw it :giggle:
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MissMorticia Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student General Artist
:highfive:
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:iconcjwilde:
CJWilde Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Writer
This looks like my absolute forté and I could not be more excited. Thank you for doing a poetry week so, so much. :aww:
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