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Supercat vs Dogzilla!
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By Creative-Caro   |   Watch
Published: May 7, 2014
© 2014 - 2019 Creative-Caro
Hello everybody!
I present you proud and nervous my very first manga or dojinshi with only two pages! That is short I know but I really really really really really hope that he is even a little bit funny or cute >.<

you have to read him from the right to the left side!

And please help me! I need as much as criticism as you can give me :blush: I want to improve myself so bad so please write me some comments or critics about everything that comes to your mind..
How do you think about the brightness- is it to dark?
Do you like the panels and could you "read" them in a nice and right order?
How do you think abot the figures and the small story?
What do you think about the perspective and so on!

I would be so glad about your words :tears:


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That is soooo cute, first off!
Ok, so the only thing that occured to me when you asked for criticism is the lack of sound effects. Can the dog at least howl when he's falling? And maybe the cape flaps when the cat is posing? 
Other than that, loved it Clap 
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
oh wow thank you! When I drew it.. I totally forgot about this!
But I am also glad you like it!
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AuraSaunaHobbyist
yeah, I got real excited when I read it. You should definitely draw more Aww 
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TriniDarkieGirl4EVAHobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
:meow:
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TriniDarkieGirl4EVAHobbyist General Artist
It might be funnier if you add words^^
DOGZILLA: What? defeated by a cat?
SUPERCAT: That's Super Cat to you, mister!
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
yeah, but english isn´t my first language.. so I would be ashamed when there are mistakes in the text or jokes that nbody understands because of my bad english >.<
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TriniDarkieGirl4EVAHobbyist General Artist
I'll help you if you like :)
Besides, people who speak German (I know quite a few) would love to see another artist of their native land :D
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
hm you are right.. when I plan the next one I will ask you about it again :meow:
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TriniDarkieGirl4EVAHobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!
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FruitnCremeStudent Digital Artist
i don't read manga so i can't really give any advice,but.....

daaawwww... :b
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
ahw :meow:
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FruitnCremeStudent Digital Artist
aww :love:
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well first off it looks amazing. the shading could have been a bit more but i also like as this. but i would love to have some colors sure black and white is awesome but i would love to see how it would look in color(my opinion). the cat is amazing ( maybe a little idea you can take the cat and make it a house cat who is actually a supercat and he will have a lot of adventures everyday and so. but when he is home he is lazy. if you do this make them short and cute like this) 
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
haha :D you guess my future plans with supercat! That was kind of how I wanted him to be and thank you so much for this great impression!
I will do some color versions with supercat soon and I hope I can make my future comic sides more
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lol i can read your mind :-o. and i would love to see that. :)
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
you are incredible :D  I will do my best!
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LiteralBananaHobbyist General Artist
Hey! That's a very cute and pretty done comic you have here.

First thing which comes into my mind is that the panels are not placed in a comfortable way. It's hard to lead the eye correctly through the first(bottom right) panels.

It would be very nice to see some dialogue or more dynamic posing with an expression.

Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
Thank you so much for taking the time for the comment!
I thought that it might be to difficult for me to do some text in my first comic, because it seems to be difficult wth the speechbubbles to me >.<
But my next one will be with text and hopefully better panels and more dynamic! thank you :huggle:
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LiteralBananaHobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Keep drawing! :D Looking forward for your next work. :)
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
Thank you so much for the watch!  :meow: I will do my best!
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delPuertoSistersHobbyist General Artist
Cool, love it! :D
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Creative-CaroStudent General Artist
Thank you so much, that means a lot to me :love:
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