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(The scene opens up with a caravan of military-grade Hummers traveling down a road in a desert in the middle of April 2014.  Then, the sound of music can be heard playing.  More specifically, it was Linking Park's song "I'll Be Gone".  A young man, by the name of Ryan was sitting in the rear left seat of the second vehicle.  He was dressed as if he was going to a business meeting, and he was holding a glass filled with Iced Tea with ice in it.  An odd silence fills the cab until...)
Ryan:  Why does it feel so quiet in here?  What is it?  Am I not allowed to talk or hold any form of conversation?
Soilder:  You have permission to talk sir.
Ryan:  Finally, a human being that can speak English.
(Everybody in the vehicle briefly laughs.)
Summer:  So, what are we out here for, honey?
Ryan:  Nothing to worry about dear.  It is just a simple test drive.  What can go wrong with test drive of just 3 brand new Humvees?
(Suddenly, the music stops when the car in front of them hit a bomb in the road and exploded, creating a pothole that was two to three feet deep.  The sounds of gunfire can be heard.)
Ryan:  Summer, get down!
(Ryan and Summer duck down just in time to escape a barrage of bullets that just barely miss their heads.)
Ryan:  (Looks at the solider that he was sitting next to) Wait, where are you going?
Solider:  Stay!  Here!
(A few seconds after the soldier said that, he got shot and and fell to the ground.)
Ryan:  Summer, get out of the car!  I'll go and call for some help.
(Ryan and Summer get out of the vehicle before another wave of bullets almost hit them.  They ran back behind a rock, and Ryan heard a missile incoming.  They ducked, and the missile missed both of them.  The missile's logo read "Oak Tech Industries".)
Ryan:  Oh shit!  RUN!
(Ryan and Summer ran as fast as they could, and before they knew it, the fire from the blast expanded past them.)
Ladies and gentlemen, this is the new story that I will be working on.  So, if you like what you see, then wait for the next chapter to come out.  The first chapter will be released on September 22.

Click here for Chapter 1
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Firesgone Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
Hey! You based this off of the script for 'Iron Man'! :D (Big Grin) 
Anichhik Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
i already know what's next AND I AIN'T TELLIN ANYONE SORRY~
cooling999 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Sorry, no spoilers here.  Move along.  XD
Anichhik Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
i shall spoil it...

Dumbledore doesn't die!
cooling999 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Huh.  That is weird.  I don't see that in the script anywhere.  XD
Anichhik Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
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