(Forgive the tardiness of this observation, but I just learned of your fine work after I received Darkmir's critique today.
) Indeed, I have to agree with all of Darkmir's observations, this is a truly wonderful piece. Not only have you captured what it is that make her a princess, I think you've captured something here that many people overlook when they speak of Deja Thoris; in that she's an alien
, and just like everyone indigenous inhabitant of Barsoom, she's oviparous. (In point of fact
there's a chapter in one of the books where Carter mentions a very special egg that Dejah is caring for.) Great work all around. (DL'd, faved, and watched.)