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Chapter 6: The Past
Chapter 6
The Past.
Beyond the boundaries of the Mist Valley, far from the trees of the Gusto forest and the stone city of the Gishki lay a small wood that stood separate from the world around by a series of fast running rivers and streams. Here the trees stand barely half the height of those within the Mist Valley and the lavish plant growth provided a sanctuary to a great variety of wildlife which had failed to survive in the habitats of the world beyond. The small makeshift island was in every way an isolated haven from the trials of the world.
And it was here, in a great school of stone and marble and glass that stood within a clearing in the centre of the wood, that Wynn the Wind Charmer had grown up.
"Hey Wynn! You coming?"
"Coming!"
Grabbing her green gem baring staff as she ran from her room, a ten year old Wynn jogged from the front doors of the school and ran over to where her friends and fellow students had gathered around a large horse drawn carriage. Just above her right s
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Literature
Chapter 5: Propaganda and Plans
Chapter 5
Propaganda and plans
Breaking news!
Yesterday afternoon, our esteemed leader Noellia dispatched a diplomatic party into the Gusto forest in a last despite attempt to find a peaceful means to the disagreement that seems to have arisen between our two tribes. Noellia has herself revealed that they bore the message of a hope to open up a mutually beneficial trading agreement with which our tribe could gain the resources that our very survival depends upon and the Gusto could gain whatever they saw fit as a price.
Yet, sadly, it would appear that these noble intentions fell upon deaf or turned ears as each of these diplomatic groups were ambushed and massacred by Gusto forces. Reports are regrettably sketchy at this time but it seems as though Gusto raiders ambushed and slaughtered the Gishki representatives in the dead of night as they moved though the central road into the Mist Valley [continued on page 4]
Eria sighed heavily as she tossed the newspaper she had been reading ont
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Literature
Chapter 4: The Ambush
Chapter 4
The Ambush
"Here they come"
Windaar offered no reply as he glanced to where Reeze had spoken, his eyes glaring thin and narrow in thought from beneath his hood. From atop of the massive form of Egul, the younger girl seemed incredibly small as she peered into the forest around them and the angle made it impossible for him to see her face but he could sense the look of determination she bore from the tone of her voice and the way she stood.
Looking back into the seemingly endless sea of trees that stretched out before him, Windaar wasn't surprised to find that he was utterly unable to see any sign of movement for himself, Reeze had always had an incredibly keen sense of sight, but he had no reason to doubt that she would be correct.
Raising a hand, he sent a mute message to the warriors gathered in the trees around him, their green armour and mounts camouflaging them perfectly with the leaves and plant life that they used to hid from praying eyes, each staring down into the di
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Literature
Chapter 3: The Shrine Maiden
Chapter 3
The Shrine Maiden
High at the peak of one of the many mountains that filled the outlines of the Mist Valley, far away from all but the most determined of preying eyes, stands a great shrine.
It stood as a great pyramid of stone and plant life that rose up higher into the sky, leaving the very clouds themselves behind to simply spread across its base, hiding it from the view of those below. The only way to access it was to climb up a twisting column of stone steps which bent at an infuriatingly steep angle, rising higher and higher up the mountain side with no protection against the harsh winds that blew across the peak. It was a daunting task to even reach the top and for the people that resided within the Mist Valley, to attempt to reach the shine was nothing sort of a pilgrimage.
Within the centre of the stone shrine, stood a large crystal which seemed to shimmer against the daylight as if it contained a green mist and emitted a faint humming sound of pent up magical power.
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Chapter 2: An Unholy Ritual and Announcment
Chapter 2
An Unholy Ritual and Announcement
Born of the voices in the fire,
Born of the voices within the deep,
May our voices call out to all that hear our choir,
And take the lands that our foes do keep.
The chant of droning voices sounded out across the night, echoing through the streets of the tribe known as the Gishki, beating of stone walls like some unholy calling into being for a presence that know would know and yet would be known by all. People tried to move about their own lives, running or jogging as fast as they dared to past the source of the chant in the hopes of avoiding the effects of what they knew would come. None looked up towards the circle of men dressed in blue, all cupping their hands together in prayer as they spoke their law and words, their faces looking down towards the ground as if each in a deep trance.
In the centre stood the figure of a young woman, her hands held out before her chest as they circled and manipulated a glowing orb of shimmering blue light
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Chapter 1: Freinds both old and new
Chapter 1
Friends both old and new
Wynn struggled to level her own breath as she pressed her small body against the side of an overturned tree, tugging her dirt covered robe tighter and slowly placing her staff on the ground so that she could crawl on all fours to peer through a gap that had appeared in the age old bark. Her green hair shook slightly in the faint wind as she narrowed a single eye against the crack, scanning the open field that she could see beyond for signs of activity or movement which would betray the coming of those she now hid from. She shuffled forward slightly and gave a hiss of pain as a stone dug into one of her bare legs, cutting through her skin to draw a slight trace of blood and causing her to pull away from her peering hole to clutch her knee in instinctive movements.
Overhead, a pair of birds flew across the brilliant blue sky, their bright green feathers reflecting the sunlight in a dazzling sight as they sored through the cloudless blue. They circled ab
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Literature
Prologue
Prologue
Once, when she had been young, Wynn had heard someone say that 'Truth was the first casualty of war'.
Back then, she hadn't understood what such a statement had meant and had simply pushed it to the back of her mind; focusing instead upon her student life or what she was going to do with her friends once the day's teachings had ended.
But now she knew what had been meant. Now she had seen the reality of such words played out before her in all of their terrible glory…
Forcing herself to open her eyes, Wynn looked down towards the ground as she flew across the remains of what had once been the borderline of the Gusto territories. Bodies of a thousand shapes and sizes, both born of the natural and unnatural, lay sprawled across the burnt almost wasteland of what had once been a beautiful stretch of pure forest. People of both the Gusto and Gishki tribe lay among each other in deaths embrace, any difference of view or desires completely forgotten as they fell in battle. The c
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Literature
A Dargonborn's family
"Mum! Mum!"
Amor sighed as she closed the small book she had been reading and placed it down onto the table next to her favorite chair, standing up with a grunt and moving towards the sound of her daughters call. She felt the wind blow in from the open window of the room as it gave a strong blow, like it had sensed her movement, and blew through the long brown hair that hung from the top of her orange/brown scaled head. It was a cold day, she could tell that much even with the increased bodily temperature that came with her dragon like body.
Amor was a Dragonborn, a race of creatures that were the elite warriors of the great Bahamut, fighters against dragons that served evil, a people driven completely towards the purpose of fighting in a war between gods. They were supposed to be in a state of Total War against the spawn of Tiamat, living not for themselves or for others but completely and utterly in service to the 'father' that had gifted them with their dragon like bodies.
Yet Amor
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Literature
A New Age-Chapter 1
Chapter 1
Arrival in a new world
"No..."
Jack ran through the burning remains of his Gym, seeing the city he had grown up in burning around him as he used his body to ram though a glass window, seeing no other exit after the main door had been consumed in fire.
Shadow City was bathed in death as he plunged into the night of the world outside and drove his way back onto his feet, charging blindly forwards as he heard an explosion tear its way through something, somewhere beyond his sight in the crumbling city. Behind him, there was a gust of wind and a large tendril of pure fire was blown out of the gym and upon the neighbouring buildings, setting them alight within seconds and beginning the great inferno that would no doubt consume everything remotely flammable.
He was the gym leader of Shadow City...it was his job to defend it from danger...and now he had failed.
He didn't know where any of his Pokémon were, he reached down to his belt, searching for the Pokéballs he had alw
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TT-A New Age trailer
"Here you are Ser'...something nice to eat"
Jack sighed as his Snivy, whom he had nicknamed Sersbi or 'Ser' for short, simply stared at the poffin in his outstretched hand before closing its eyes and looking away. This was the second time in as many days that he had tried to feed his new Pokémon one of the treats that he had brought with him from the Goin Region but, from what he could see, poffins were completely none existent in the Unova Region and thus Sersbi had never seen one before...and that only added to her apparent distrust of him.
"Mime mime mime"
Sersbi opened its eyes as Jr jumped onto the counter beside her and took the poffin from Jack, making a point to be completely visible to the grass type Pokémon as it snapped the poffin in half and proceeded to eat away at one of the pieces. Once he had finished, Jr gave another loud cheer and its best 'you can trust me because I'm cute' smile before holding the second half up for the Snivy to take.
Again, Sersbi was sil
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Chapter 4-Forming a group
"And were done!"
Jack smiled as he pulled himself out of the velvet chair as Nurse Joy turned back towards him; carrying a silver tray in her hands which bore his lone Pokéball contained Pokémon whist Jr skipped happily alongside of her. He nodded his thanks as he picked up the Pokéball and felt Jr us his clothes as a sort of climbing frame as it pulled itself up onto its usual place on his shoulder. Perching in a groove in the black suit its trainer wore.
"You have a pair of strong, young Pokémon there" She smiled back at him as she pulled a Poffin out of her pocket and handed it to the Jr, the small Pokémon giggling like mad as it munched on the treat, dropping crumbs all down Jack's new coat "This Mime. Jr has developed a strong trust in you as all partner Pokémon should…a trust that your Abra seems to also share, despite the fact that you only received it yesterday…"
"Oh yer" Jack smiled as he looked down towards the Pokéball "Well my Gr
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Chapter 3 - Starting Out
Chapter 3- Starting out
"And thus, the S.S. Anne has set off on its maiden voyage towards the Sinnoh Region today, baring with it a collection of over five hundred passengers and their Pokémon. This marks the dawn of a new era for inter-region travel as trainers look forward towards a new way of luxuries travel as further companies announce plans to open up their own cruise ship which may well be open for public use by the end of next year"
Jack tried, and failed, to stifle a yawn as he allowed his head to fall against the back of the sofa which he had managed to sink in, allowing the fatigue of over four days of no sleep to sweep over his body like a tidal wave. He heard the news woman on the T.V. continue to drone on about how brilliant the S.S. Anne was before moving on to a story about the latest sighting of Team Rocket in the Kanto region and whether or not they could be targeting the S.S. Anne. Not that he could really care if they did or not at that time, he was more concer
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Chapter 2- A New Duo
Chapter 2-A New Duo
"Half price sale on all Pokémon clothes! Dress your Pokémon in the cutest outfits you could imagine, all for half price!"
"That's just pathetic..." Jack murmured as he pushed his glasses back up his nose when a gust of wind threatened to blow them off. Nodding his thanks to the man behind the counter as he was handed the bag of cookies he had bought, he turned and made his way down the city centre of Shadow City, casting a disapproving look to a posh looking woman who walked by with a Delcatty wearing a dress. The latest fashion all the way from the Shinnoh Region they called it, something that took the idea of Pokémon taking on their human's personalities to the extreme in such a way that it almost got scary. You haven't known freaky until you had seen a Slaking in a thong...
Sighing in irritation, Jack took another bite from the cookie he held in his hand.
It had been a week since he had graduated from the academy and already he was beginning to fee
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Dungeon-Diver Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
There was a mistake in treasure calculation, you should have gotten a :llama: in addition to your cut. DM asked me to give this to you.
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Wings-of-Twilights Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
Dude can you allow private messages again on FF so I can message you xD
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commingdarkness Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
Allow? I hadnt set it not to allow them...didnt know you could...let me have a look
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commingdarkness Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011
well that was indeed strange...fixed now! Send away :)
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Wings-of-Twilights Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
Dude where did you go? Dx
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AlCyanide Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Student Writer
Meow,

So hi :) I know I said I'd email you the script for The Given but it's not coming along so well at the moment :( Just thought I'd let you know why I haven't sent it yet :) Hopefully I'll get it going on soon :)
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commingdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010
Awsome...I was wondering so thanks for letting me know :)
Btw, remember that pokemon story i was talking about on Legion? It can now be found on my DA account, check it out if you want. Your character makes a brief camio in chapter 1
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AlCyanide Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2010  Student Writer
Ooooh yay :D Will do :)
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Wings-of-Twilights Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
Hi me is here xD
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commingdarkness Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
Ah, twilight, good to have you here
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