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Chapter 6: The Past

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Chapter 6: The Past

Chapter 6 The Past. Beyond the boundaries of the Mist Valley, far from the trees of the Gusto forest and the stone city of the Gishki lay a small wood that stood separate from the world around by a series of fast running rivers and streams. Here the trees stand barely half the height of those within the Mist Valley and the lavish plant growth provided a sanctuary to a great variety of wildlife which had failed to survive in the habitats of the world beyond. The small makeshift island was in every way an isolated haven from the trials of the world. And it was here, in a great school of stone and marble and glass that stood within a clearing

Chapter 5: Propaganda and Plans

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Chapter 5: Propaganda and Plans

Chapter 5 Propaganda and plans Breaking news! Yesterday afternoon, our esteemed leader Noellia dispatched a diplomatic party into the Gusto forest in a last despite attempt to find a peaceful means to the disagreement that seems to have arisen between our two tribes. Noellia has herself revealed that they bore the message of a hope to open up a mutually beneficial trading agreement with which our tribe could gain the resources that our very survival depends upon and the Gusto could gain whatever they saw fit as a price. Yet, sadly, it would appear that these noble intentions fell upon deaf or turned ears as each of these diplomatic groups

Chapter 4: The Ambush

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Chapter 4: The Ambush

Chapter 4 The Ambush "Here they come" Windaar offered no reply as he glanced to where Reeze had spoken, his eyes glaring thin and narrow in thought from beneath his hood. From atop of the massive form of Egul, the younger girl seemed incredibly small as she peered into the forest around them and the angle made it impossible for him to see her face but he could sense the look of determination she bore from the tone of her voice and the way she stood. Looking back into the seemingly endless sea of trees that stretched out before him, Windaar wasn't surprised to find that he was utterly unable to see any sign of movement for himself, Reeze h

Chapter 3: The Shrine Maiden

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Chapter 3: The Shrine Maiden

Chapter 3 The Shrine Maiden High at the peak of one of the many mountains that filled the outlines of the Mist Valley, far away from all but the most determined of preying eyes, stands a great shrine. It stood as a great pyramid of stone and plant life that rose up higher into the sky, leaving the very clouds themselves behind to simply spread across its base, hiding it from the view of those below. The only way to access it was to climb up a twisting column of stone steps which bent at an infuriatingly steep angle, rising higher and higher up the mountain side with no protection against the harsh winds that blew across the peak. It was a

Chapter 2: An Unholy Ritual and Announcment

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Chapter 2: An Unholy Ritual and Announcment

Chapter 2 An Unholy Ritual and Announcement Born of the voices in the fire, Born of the voices within the deep, May our voices call out to all that hear our choir, And take the lands that our foes do keep. The chant of droning voices sounded out across the night, echoing through the streets of the tribe known as the Gishki, beating of stone walls like some unholy calling into being for a presence that know would know and yet would be known by all. People tried to move about their own lives, running or jogging as fast as they dared to past the source of the chant in the hopes of avoiding the effects of what they knew would come. None

Chapter 1: Freinds both old and new

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Chapter 1: Freinds both old and new

Chapter 1 Friends both old and new Wynn struggled to level her own breath as she pressed her small body against the side of an overturned tree, tugging her dirt covered robe tighter and slowly placing her staff on the ground so that she could crawl on all fours to peer through a gap that had appeared in the age old bark. Her green hair shook slightly in the faint wind as she narrowed a single eye against the crack, scanning the open field that she could see beyond for signs of activity or movement which would betray the coming of those she now hid from. She shuffled forward slightly and gave a hiss of pain as a stone dug into one of her bar

Prologue

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Prologue

Prologue Once, when she had been young, Wynn had heard someone say that 'Truth was the first casualty of war'. Back then, she hadn't understood what such a statement had meant and had simply pushed it to the back of her mind; focusing instead upon her student life or what she was going to do with her friends once the day's teachings had ended. But now she knew what had been meant. Now she had seen the reality of such words played out before her in all of their terrible glory… Forcing herself to open her eyes, Wynn looked down towards the ground as she flew across the remains of what had once been the borderline of the Gusto territori

A Dargonborn's family

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A Dargonborn's family

"Mum! Mum!" Amor sighed as she closed the small book she had been reading and placed it down onto the table next to her favorite chair, standing up with a grunt and moving towards the sound of her daughters call. She felt the wind blow in from the open window of the room as it gave a strong blow, like it had sensed her movement, and blew through the long brown hair that hung from the top of her orange/brown scaled head. It was a cold day, she could tell that much even with the increased bodily temperature that came with her dragon like body. Amor was a Dragonborn, a race of creatures that were the elite warriors of the great Bahamut, fight

A New Age-Chapter 1

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A New Age-Chapter 1

Chapter 1 Arrival in a new world "No..." Jack ran through the burning remains of his Gym, seeing the city he had grown up in burning around him as he used his body to ram though a glass window, seeing no other exit after the main door had been consumed in fire. Shadow City was bathed in death as he plunged into the night of the world outside and drove his way back onto his feet, charging blindly forwards as he heard an explosion tear its way through something, somewhere beyond his sight in the crumbling city. Behind him, there was a gust of wind and a large tendril of pure fire was blown out of the gym and upon the neighbouring building

TT-A New Age trailer

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TT-A New Age trailer

"Here you are Ser'...something nice to eat" Jack sighed as his Snivy, whom he had nicknamed Sersbi or 'Ser' for short, simply stared at the poffin in his outstretched hand before closing its eyes and looking away. This was the second time in as many days that he had tried to feed his new Pokémon one of the treats that he had brought with him from the Goin Region but, from what he could see, poffins were completely none existent in the Unova Region and thus Sersbi had never seen one before...and that only added to her apparent distrust of him. "Mime mime mime" Sersbi opened its eyes as Jr jumped onto the counter beside her and took th
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Chapter 6: The Past

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Chapter 6: The Past

Chapter 6 The Past. Beyond the boundaries of the Mist Valley, far from the trees of the Gusto forest and the stone city of the Gishki lay a small wood that stood separate from the world around by a series of fast running rivers and streams. Here the trees stand barely half the height of those within the Mist Valley and the lavish plant growth provided a sanctuary to a great variety of wildlife which had failed to survive in the habitats of the world beyond. The small makeshift island was in every way an isolated haven from the trials of the world. And it was here, in a great school of stone and marble and glass that stood within a clearing

Chapter 5: Propaganda and Plans

C

Chapter 5: Propaganda and Plans

Chapter 5 Propaganda and plans Breaking news! Yesterday afternoon, our esteemed leader Noellia dispatched a diplomatic party into the Gusto forest in a last despite attempt to find a peaceful means to the disagreement that seems to have arisen between our two tribes. Noellia has herself revealed that they bore the message of a hope to open up a mutually beneficial trading agreement with which our tribe could gain the resources that our very survival depends upon and the Gusto could gain whatever they saw fit as a price. Yet, sadly, it would appear that these noble intentions fell upon deaf or turned ears as each of these diplomatic groups

Chapter 4: The Ambush

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Chapter 4: The Ambush

Chapter 4 The Ambush "Here they come" Windaar offered no reply as he glanced to where Reeze had spoken, his eyes glaring thin and narrow in thought from beneath his hood. From atop of the massive form of Egul, the younger girl seemed incredibly small as she peered into the forest around them and the angle made it impossible for him to see her face but he could sense the look of determination she bore from the tone of her voice and the way she stood. Looking back into the seemingly endless sea of trees that stretched out before him, Windaar wasn't surprised to find that he was utterly unable to see any sign of movement for himself, Reeze h

Chapter 3: The Shrine Maiden

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Chapter 3: The Shrine Maiden

Chapter 3 The Shrine Maiden High at the peak of one of the many mountains that filled the outlines of the Mist Valley, far away from all but the most determined of preying eyes, stands a great shrine. It stood as a great pyramid of stone and plant life that rose up higher into the sky, leaving the very clouds themselves behind to simply spread across its base, hiding it from the view of those below. The only way to access it was to climb up a twisting column of stone steps which bent at an infuriatingly steep angle, rising higher and higher up the mountain side with no protection against the harsh winds that blew across the peak. It was a

Chapter 2: An Unholy Ritual and Announcment

C

Chapter 2: An Unholy Ritual and Announcment

Chapter 2 An Unholy Ritual and Announcement Born of the voices in the fire, Born of the voices within the deep, May our voices call out to all that hear our choir, And take the lands that our foes do keep. The chant of droning voices sounded out across the night, echoing through the streets of the tribe known as the Gishki, beating of stone walls like some unholy calling into being for a presence that know would know and yet would be known by all. People tried to move about their own lives, running or jogging as fast as they dared to past the source of the chant in the hopes of avoiding the effects of what they knew would come. None

Chapter 1: Freinds both old and new

C

Chapter 1: Freinds both old and new

Chapter 1 Friends both old and new Wynn struggled to level her own breath as she pressed her small body against the side of an overturned tree, tugging her dirt covered robe tighter and slowly placing her staff on the ground so that she could crawl on all fours to peer through a gap that had appeared in the age old bark. Her green hair shook slightly in the faint wind as she narrowed a single eye against the crack, scanning the open field that she could see beyond for signs of activity or movement which would betray the coming of those she now hid from. She shuffled forward slightly and gave a hiss of pain as a stone dug into one of her bar

Prologue

P

Prologue

Prologue Once, when she had been young, Wynn had heard someone say that 'Truth was the first casualty of war'. Back then, she hadn't understood what such a statement had meant and had simply pushed it to the back of her mind; focusing instead upon her student life or what she was going to do with her friends once the day's teachings had ended. But now she knew what had been meant. Now she had seen the reality of such words played out before her in all of their terrible glory… Forcing herself to open her eyes, Wynn looked down towards the ground as she flew across the remains of what had once been the borderline of the Gusto territori

A Dargonborn's family

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A Dargonborn's family

"Mum! Mum!" Amor sighed as she closed the small book she had been reading and placed it down onto the table next to her favorite chair, standing up with a grunt and moving towards the sound of her daughters call. She felt the wind blow in from the open window of the room as it gave a strong blow, like it had sensed her movement, and blew through the long brown hair that hung from the top of her orange/brown scaled head. It was a cold day, she could tell that much even with the increased bodily temperature that came with her dragon like body. Amor was a Dragonborn, a race of creatures that were the elite warriors of the great Bahamut, fight

A New Age-Chapter 1

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A New Age-Chapter 1

Chapter 1 Arrival in a new world "No..." Jack ran through the burning remains of his Gym, seeing the city he had grown up in burning around him as he used his body to ram though a glass window, seeing no other exit after the main door had been consumed in fire. Shadow City was bathed in death as he plunged into the night of the world outside and drove his way back onto his feet, charging blindly forwards as he heard an explosion tear its way through something, somewhere beyond his sight in the crumbling city. Behind him, there was a gust of wind and a large tendril of pure fire was blown out of the gym and upon the neighbouring building

TT-A New Age trailer

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TT-A New Age trailer

"Here you are Ser'...something nice to eat" Jack sighed as his Snivy, whom he had nicknamed Sersbi or 'Ser' for short, simply stared at the poffin in his outstretched hand before closing its eyes and looking away. This was the second time in as many days that he had tried to feed his new Pokémon one of the treats that he had brought with him from the Goin Region but, from what he could see, poffins were completely none existent in the Unova Region and thus Sersbi had never seen one before...and that only added to her apparent distrust of him. "Mime mime mime" Sersbi opened its eyes as Jr jumped onto the counter beside her and took th
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There was a mistake in treasure calculation, you should have gotten a :llama: in addition to your cut. DM asked me to give this to you.
Dude can you allow private messages again on FF so I can message you xD
Allow? I hadnt set it not to allow them...didnt know you could...let me have a look
well that was indeed strange...fixed now! Send away :)
Dude where did you go? Dx
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So hi :) I know I said I'd email you the script for The Given but it's not coming along so well at the moment :( Just thought I'd let you know why I haven't sent it yet :) Hopefully I'll get it going on soon :)
Awsome...I was wondering so thanks for letting me know :)
Btw, remember that pokemon story i was talking about on Legion? It can now be found on my DA account, check it out if you want. Your character makes a brief camio in chapter 1