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Also, I like the advice @somestrangebirds , offers; except I have to disagree with the suggestion of not using the word "shells" to describe, for reason of being too familiar. Typically I would agree. But I think for this particular work the familiarity is on point, for it describes perfectly the (feeling) of becoming just another 'clone', all similar, one to the other; dreadful, and boring. It's pretty much the essence of the poem. ( in my humble opinion)

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