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prettyflourHobbyist General Artist


Hey there,


Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconPoeticalCondidtion: with the critique you requested.


I think this poem is successful in every way. The brevity works nicely- you say a whole lot with just a few words!  The rhyme and flow of the poem are spot on, which makes it easy to read and understand.  A good read with a powerful message. I have no other constructive criticism to offer…


Thank you and have a great night.


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Lady---VengeanceHobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much! And apologies for the late reply!