Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconPoeticalCondidtion: with the critique you requested.
I think this poem is successful in every way. The brevity works nicely- you say a whole lot with just a few words! The rhyme and flow of the poem are spot on, which makes it easy to read and understand. A good read with a powerful message. I have no other constructive criticism to offer…
Thank you and have a great night.