FallarRasyre's avatar
Not bad for a Shorty. Few errors here and there, but nothing too serious or worthy of note.
killerpen's avatar
Thanks! Wrote this one back in 2012 lol. Appreciate the comment.
FallarRasyre's avatar

Well, take this from a fellow writer, as it's very important: NEVER stop writing.

Why? Simply this. If you do, it'll be difficult to start again, also, your writing style will drastically change from when you originally wrote. Better make a smooth transition and continue being creative.

(I personally regret not having continued.)