GammaEradon's avatar
I like this!! I really like a good Braeburn story and this is written really well! I'm not familiar with deadlands but you explained the concepts well so that even I can follow what's happening. Can't wait to see if Braeburn runs into Little Strongheart or Applejack or any of his other old friends. I would just point out that in your preview you first introduce Little Strongheart as 'Braveheart'

This is a great story I'll be keeping my eye open for updates!!