Your very welcome
Not at all it added to the charm. its actually what drew me to it...
I always emphasized multi-perspectivity ...
but I've never boldly pointed out what 1 perceived himself doing and what 2 perceived him doing. it really turn out nice in that form ..
although most ppl might not appreciate... then again ..
I've been accused of torturing my readers on several occasions.
while i see it as endearment, would i go through all the trouble of torturing them if i didn't care