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2/17-Ridiculousness
An idiot I see
Is no more than me
Somehow these people are lucid
And doing something stupid
I cannot bear the site
Of idiots tonight
So let us away
Before the end of this ridiculous day
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2/12-Paranormal
A handprint on the wall
Shadows dashing down the hall
A ball bouncing down the stair
Something floating in midair
All these things give me a chill
But you my dear give me a thrill
So scary and pretty
It is such a pity
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2/3-Purgatory
A cleansing of sins in fire
Awakens the heart to suffering desire
To cleanse the world of pain
Makes for more of which they gain
And you hurt to heal
And learn to conceal
Finest fires of screaming silence
Tell us the pain of purging science
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1/29-Insecurity
I do not know
I am not sure
Above or below
Neither is pure
A world of uncertainty
And of insecurities
I do not wish to be left here
Drowning in insecurity and fear
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1/12-Oblivion
So at the end of this day
We sit and watch and waste away
And as the burning sun must set
We only give what we can get
And my dear i wish we could be together
But we will only fade away and exist never
And so let us go before they forget our name
And fade into oblivion for the lack of our shame
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12/2-Euphoria
I lose myself in simple pleasures
And happy myself in innumerable measures
I reduce myself to the state of a little boy
To give myself such immeasurable joy
And hope that I may one day dance
Or find myself a true romance
Happiness is something that we seek
All may find it, but it is hard to keep
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11/18- Victory
When a man is done
And the battle is won
One must clame the title of winner
No longer a vicious evil sinner
And it be you or I upon that hill
Crowned king for all the thrill
And sweet victory will be ours
In the calm and fading hours
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11/12-Valor
The bones of souls shall rattle
Under the quaking of the roar of battle
But those who can withstand
Hold courage in their hand
And wipe away the pain
For their courageous gain
For the battle is won
By someone who does not run
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11/4-Exhaustion
My eyelids are slowly closing shut
Every inch of light goes dark but
I keep the lights on
Despite something being wrong
And I realize I didn't get sleep last night
But to stay awake is a fight
If only that I could retreat
And get off of my feet
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10/27- Frustrations
A one point away from victory
Being so far from being here with me
Feeling incomplete and wanting satisfaction
Wanting to use you, hold you for all my lovely action
Being apart of an endless cycle of nothing
Wanting to be a part of something
These are things that frustrate me so
Which makes me sad to be here so I will go
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10/20- Money
Monetary pleasures bring sadness
Or maybe a temporary gladness
And I hope your satisfied with your greed
And your constant green and never ending need
For money may be the root of all evil to me
But to you it is how you live and how you see
I wish you weren't so motivated
By the one thing that people have hated
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10/13-Romance
Somehwere along the line
Your hand seemed to find mine
And when we parted at your doors
Somehow my lips explored and found yours
We spoke softly yet somewhat true
And I seemed to fall into you
So my dear it is time to dance
And take my hand in yours for romance
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10/6- Anxiety
White knuckles clench to you
A fear inside me is waiting to brew
Please get me out of this Hell
This worry whispers secrets I never want to tell
My hands are clenched and shaking
And I feel myself breaking
These nerves are making me weak
And you are the only solace I seek  
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9/29- Age
An old hand on my shoulder
I glance down and realize that it is older
It was my father and he looked at me to say
"My boy, you'll be like me someday
And you'll find the troubles you had
Will be gone but you won't be glad"
I understand his words. Now I see
How age has become a drag on me
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9/24- Separation
I deleted your face and hit unfollow
It's my medication, a hard pill to swallow
I need to separate and start anew
But it's hard to get over you
You promised me love and happiness
But I cannot go on like this
In time i will do what I do
And learn to erase me from you
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9/22- Creativity
Creativity comes in many ways
On moonlight shadows and daytime rays
In dewdrop daydreams and among the sea
And in such nonsense like you and me
On whims and wonders so wonderful
The grandeuer beauty which is beautiful
Among the ramblings of you and me
I find the fashion of creativity
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Does anyone still use this website? :D it must be at least a or something. It feels like a millennium ago I was using this place...anyways if you're reading this then good news: I've decided to start up the ol' profile again. What with there being some time in my schedule this week and my creative writing class I'm currently taking, I figure I'll put some more writing up to anyone who wants to view it. Thanks for the birthday wishes everyone. Hope all is going well!   

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Fursona: Hiya! I's Nate! I'm a widdle panda. I'm often shy, but i actually like people once i get ta know 'em!
Likes: playing around, meeting new people, napping, diapers & cuddling ^^
Dislikes: loud noises, the dark
Reality: Hi there! My name is Josh, and i am a quirky teenage Floridian. I am a TBDL and a HUGE fan of babyfur. I am not an artist, but i do dabble in literature with poems and a few stories here and there. I do take story and
poem trades/ commissions. Also that is how i will mainly get most of the art in my gallery cause i can't draw to save my life :D. I would greatly appreciate art with my oc Nate in it ^^
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SawuScimitar74 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2018
Happy late Birthday! Hope it was a good one! :D
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SweetMomoPuffs Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday Nate
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birthdays Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2018
:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

It's March 13thth which means it's that time of the year again and your special day is here! We hope you have an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year!

Many well wishes and love from your friendly birthdays team :love:
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Foothepanda Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
Happy birthday!
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Annaivri Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday! Cake by Sinister-Starfeesh
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Foothepanda Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2018  Hobbyist Photographer
O-oh hey, you're still around!
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birthdays Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

It's March 13th which means it's that time of the year again and your special day is here! We hope you have an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year!

Many well wishes and love from your friendly birthdays team :love:

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Jasperinity Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017
Happy birthday! :D
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tailslover42 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thankies for da favy ^w^ *huggly huggles*
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