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a glasses makes the difernce

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created with the inkpad app for ipad.
Mlp Fim (c) Lauren Faust and Hasbro
Art by me.

first time drawing vinyl scratsh/dj pon 3 (no red eyes)

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I have to say, this is one of the best Derpy comics I have seen in quite awhile!

The idea of Vinyl being the two identities reminds me of the gag where Clark Kent would take off his glasses, and people would be like "HEY, IT'S SUPERMAN!"

The originality is also quite unique. Vinyl and Derpy do not get a lot of interaction in the fandom to my knowledge.

The artwork is so accurate to the show, I don't really know if you are using PNGs or you are a drawing them by hand, which can be concerning due to the fact that Hasbro is copyrighting the fandom, so I would recommend you saying that you drew this by hand. Doing so would just make your reputation as an artist even better!

Overall, this comic is adorable enough to give you 20 thumbs up! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
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This is really funny not to mention Derpy's eyes are all round about so that might have been the problem, idk why but that is what I think.. Doubted. If anyone thinks so please try posting the comment below. I do not know whether or not I should agree with myself, or just decline myself. Derpy is most of the time stupid/silly, so I thought the eyes are the problem. Sometimes she is clumsy, mabye her eyes did not see the truth behind the glasses. I don't see the difference between her without and with XD.. Derpy did... which is strange XD.
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I personally love your style, the short story, and expressions you give them, not too extreme and not too muted, but as I looked at your comic I noticed something odd. Your transitions seem a bit to spaced apart (ex. vinyl standing to sitting in position, Ditzy sitting to flying.)
Another thing is in panel three and four Ditzy's stomach seems to be over her hind leg, and it confuses my eyes, for you don't seems to do that in the first panel. Don't get me wrong thought I loves your comics and back rounds, so keep up the beautiful work.
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OmigoshOmigoshOmigoshOmigosh!
This is beautiful! And funny! XD. I love the two ponies, BUT I LOVE MORE YOUR COMIC :333
Beautiful job,it looks so original..so awesome..it's all the perfect things that one ocmic has! I watch your comics everyday, everytime, every second of my fucking life, I see your comics because I love them!
I know I know I'm repeating the same words many times. That's why because I don't know what to say! XD. But really, really, really, this ocmics..are god's cookies.
Make more of this please!!! Everyone (just like me) loves this comics! please, don't stop doing this, please...
Well :3.. Goodbye!
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This is a nice littel short n' sweet comic of two of the most beloved background / effect characters in "my littel pony friend ship is magic".
Thiscomic is given origanality for use the two characters ( left : vinyl scratch [ other name : "DJ pon 3" ] , right : derpy ) in the series that have'nt been given any type of voice , script , or personality. Making the two interact with each other gives a pleasing appeal towards the fans. The coloring adds a very nice visual to the comic - its not too bright , and also not very dark either. I hope this artist makes more comics involving the following characters later on as they progress with their other pieces as well.
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I've seen a lot of this artist's work which consists of Comic strips featuring characters of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic. His comics bring me to a smile and most of the time to a laugh. The art style is very good and I look forward to future work from this artist. And since this comic has Vinyl Scratch and Derpy Hooves, it makes it all that much more better. I've seen other comics featuring ponies but usually they don't copy one another
Good Art style so 5 stars
It made me laugh
so 5 stars on the impact.
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I don't mean to offend, but this seems less like a critique and more like a comment.
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I guess you could say that. Now that you mention it It really was that I guess, but I think I got to the point.
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Thnx for the critique ( for my first critique )
Sorry for the late reply.
Have a llama
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Not a problem, and thanks! Anything to tell you that you are doing a good job.
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Superman reference
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Wasn't it the fans who first depicted her without glasses, then it became so mainstream they implemented it?
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Oh my god, you're clark Kent
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could i do an audio comic reading of this on my youtube.   i will leave link and give credit
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When you think about it, it's kind of easy to tell Vinyl's the musician. I think it's because of Derpy's eyes, but I don't care! IT'S HILARIOUS!!!!
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hahahaha i didnt know this is dj pon too XDDDDDD
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LOL!!
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Rule of the every cartoon: wear glasses - nobody will recognize you
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That actually extends to... Well, yeah, Superman was a comic to begin with. ;)
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xD
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