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What's on the menu? by Coltsteelstallion What's on the menu? by Coltsteelstallion


Created with the inkpad app for iPad.
mlp:fim (c) Lauren and Hasbro,
art by me.
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:iconcoltsteelstallion:<grazing is pretty normal for ponies ya know.
:iconrarityshockedplz:<wha..wha...whaaat!!!

I still wonder if the ponies in equestria actually graze like normal equines. It's just something silly to think about ;) 
They do eat flowers,though, so why not.

I'm not really proud of the background in this one. Mostly backgrounds isn't really my thing to do but I really disliked it this time :( 
Ah..well, can't be perfect. At least it has my two favorite characters in it (I just love applejack)  

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I'm open for critiques again. If you feel like giving critiques to my comic then please feel free to do so. Should I do something better or do I totally suck. I leave it all up to you.

Thank you. 

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Master Brohoof!!!
:iconmushroomcloudplz::iconelectricbrohoof1plz::iconelectricbrohoof2plz::iconmushroomcloudplz:

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The comic in whole is a treat for the eyes and sense of homor, but let's hear about the comic in parts. For Vision, I would give this a full 5 stars. The color flows quite nicely (even with the eyes) and nothing really stands out sorely. Originality shall get a 4.5 stars. This joke has been done before, but it was done so well with the comic (as these are younger versions of Rarity and Applejack) that it gives the "Home Grown" food joke a refreshing taste. Technique get's a 4.5 stars as well. Although the talking bubbles are small enough to give the viewer more to see in the background, they still seem a bit on the small side. The white background and black text help a bit, but the speach overall could take up a few pixles more space (be not afraid! It wont ruin your comic). Impact overall is a 5/5 stars. Good Job and keep it up!!
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Great comic strip, great use of the character's traits and forms. It plays up both of their sides-Applejack's practicality and Rarity's wish for "exclusive" and "high class"-and it plays with it in a way that makes perfectly good sense. Art and style is very much spot on, and the joke itself is better than 70% of the stuff that the show will try to pull.

Only real complaint is that I want to see what happens next. What will Rarity do next with the knowledge that what she thought was a high-end item is so...plebeian. How will Applejack deal with Rarity's issue? And, will Derpy get paid this week for work?

Note, this are all GOOD things. It's leaving us wanting more that makes this a great strip.
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eta-gamma-14 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2017
Sometimes the truth is better left concealed.
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:iconkasalaurend:
KasaLaurend Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016  Professional General Artist
lolz
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:iconodnamra11:
odnamra11 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, they probably wash it rarity.
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:iconsoulflutigress:
Soulflutigress Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
yess
*evil laughter*
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:iconmelodyswift:
MelodySwift Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student Photographer
HOLY MOTHER I SEE DOGE ON THE HOUSE WINDOW OMG!11
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:iconbrony3099:
brony3099 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
yes just yes 
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:iconsonic2125:
Sonic2125 Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The ponies eat so much different food such like cupcakes, pies, pancakes etc. I forgot about the whole horses eat grass and hay thing

Used to do it a lot back in season 1

This comic is funny and genius :D
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:iconijoinedforponies:
IJoinedForPonies Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
lol...
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:iconnyysjan:
Nyysjan Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
Here's the thing though.
There's difference between eating salad that has been washed, and eating salad someone has walked on.
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:iconguardianofaurora:
GuardianOfAurora Featured By Owner May 5, 2015
FUCK!!!
FINALLY!!!

Sorry.
It's just...
(This topic has been bugging me for so long.)
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:iconsonictalicorn:
SonicTAlicorn Featured By Owner May 3, 2015
Yup. XD
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:iconpsychopathneb:
psychopathneb Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Student Artist
rarity and her ability to not understand basic instinct
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:iconsharkbrush:
Sharkbrush Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Student General Artist
Doge and top
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:iconhacksaw606:
Hacksaw606 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015
Is that a Tower of Pimps I spy in the background on the 2nd panel?
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:iconthompsonlk:
Thompsonlk Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
Preach AJ Preach...
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:iconchimkoe:
chimkoe Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All this time
you have been mine,
I don't know why
but it's a rhyme,
So plz don't stay
just go away,
Just go an play
with lovely clay :D
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:iconfredrickfazbear:
FredrickFazbear Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Saw:

Doge and Minecraft Blocks
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:iconbonbon1heart:
BonBon1Heart Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student Artist
Tru me too
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:iconpatrikov909:
Patrikov909 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
HAHAHAHA
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:iconkyoshi001:
Kyoshi001 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
Haha yes all tis time
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:iconartision:
Artision Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
Was that Out of Work Derpy..?  Great comic, you catch & work the characters very well... [Hoof-Bump]  ^_^
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:icontechzeropyro:
TechZeroPyro Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Rarity: MY LIFE IS A LIE!
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:iconinterlopers29:
InterloperS29 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THAT EXPLAINS EVERYTHING
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:iconawesomecraft124:
awesomecraft124 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
XD this is even better than the time MunchingBrotato found out that dA was older than Flickr
"oh my god, my entire life is a lie"
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:icondragonessgrace:
DragonessGrace Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Who else see doge?
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:iconcheetahdeathheart:
CheetahDeathHeart Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
meDoge Rainbow doge emote Doge Doge troll emote doge la Doge? :shibe: Doge icon :mlgmontage: Woof Icon Doge Woof Doge Emoticon ExtremeLittleDogePlz Crappy looking Sonic the Hedgehoge emoticon Doge Emoticon Dogekip Emoticon (Mudkip doge) Milla The Doge Emoticon Uncle Doge Emoticon Treekoge Emoticon (Treeko doge) Dogechic Emoticon (Torchic doge) Randomly colored pixels doge emoticon Eggdoge Emoticon (Eggman Doge)Scooby Doge Emoticon (Scooby Doo Doge)Eggdoge Classic Emoticon (Eggman doge) Dogeless Emoticon (doge heartless) Eggdoge Nega Emoticon (Eggman Nega Doge) Eggdoge Boom EmoticonDogebotnik Emoticon (Dr Robotnik doge) Yodoge Emoticon (Yoda Doge) 
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hrostami Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
:iconlolmemeplz:
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:iconambadi:
AMBADI Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Probably not, we don't eat raw wheat or paddy plants, it was processed into flour & rice first. It's probably the same in Equestria.
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:iconlordsleeper:
LordSleeper Featured By Owner Edited Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Does the expression "Served!" applies here? /)
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creepypastakittn Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015
I think so!
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:iconshena12345:
shena12345 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Student Artist
Doge is in first panel in that window up top right ->
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:iconponyfan2014:
PonyFan2014 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Doge ....Doge troll emote Rainbow doge emote 
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:iconsugarcookie310:
SugarCookie310 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dafuq Doge?

And what are you doing here, 4-block-tall tower of gold?
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:iconflamingshadow330:
flamingshadow330 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I found a doge
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:iconvincent0215:
Vincent0215 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Budder pillar in square 2 in the tree!
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:iconhindenburg19890:
Hindenburg19890 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
EPIC BROHOOF!
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:icongingerwish:
Gingerwish Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see doge and yellow thing.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Yay. Logic in Equestria. About time.
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:iconprincessofdestiny114:
PrincessofDestiny114 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Nah. Yah just eat 'em! 
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Yay, AJ in a bandana.
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AdamsCamaroZ28 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Comic: epic
Finding Doge: :rofl:
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:iconcuddlesaurus21:
cuddlesaurus21 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, oh dear!! :XD:
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:iconhoneyhaymen88976:
Honeyhaymen88976 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
SOGE!
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:iconpauleen-mlp:
Pauleen-MLP Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
I FOUND DOGE!!!!
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ultramar48921 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
im sure that grass is washed before eating
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:iconpepsi-coia:
Pepsi-CoIa Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i found doge!
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:iconlillygeneva:
LillyGeneva Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
I found tetris in a tree
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meepers21111 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I found it too
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Pepsi-CoIa Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XDDD
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Pepsi-CoIa Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ZDDDD
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