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:iconcherintin:
Cherintin Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018
hello! i hoped you were still active- 
im looking for this ref sheet of the basic mers you once made i think it said we could use it as base but  im just gonna use it as a ref on the sizes because i think you are very good at these designs

also atem with his mom omg im dead thats so cute

i do hope youd continue this story at one point because its the best out there 3w3
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thank you! And yes I am active. I am working on the future chapters though job and busy schedules on my end of slowed me. ^^ 
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:iconcherintin:
Cherintin Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018
Well i do wish you the best of luck and i look forward to any updats ;D
keep being amazing 
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you kindly. :)
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Tenkokukutiw Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017
It's a very interesting fan fic as you rethink the world away from the original themed atmospheres.
Do not be wrong the clear data sheets reproduction style life asi
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I'm glad you find them interesting. :)
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Tenkokukutiw Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017
Weigh I have weakness couples not being the parefan ficfan of lordegdy and sweet girl (It's not bad this, it's just very clicles)
True I strong world concept merfloker, but focused on mifere mamifereos and beings pre homo sapies. I did not give an explanation of the theory of the water monkey. You can live well any mystics have under sleeve.
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CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uhm, I'm sorry, I think there were several typos or something, I don't understand. ?
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:icontenkokukutiw:
Tenkokukutiw Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017
Basically, the work of the strong point is a concept of the world. you take characters yu-gi-oh, you get like Merflokor lives between nandertales and dolphins, olgo asi. e reminds a lot of "Aquatic ape hypothesis"*.

It's a good ficfan, couples despite I like couples, it's very basic clichés and it follows very common trompanos ficfan world (it's not bad itself), but the world is worked. I like more
Datasheets  to know more of the world.
* en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aquatic_…
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:iconcoffeeaddicteddragon:
CoffeeAddictedDragon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah I think I see. I've heard of the aquatic ape theory before, though it doesn't have anything really to do with the fan fiction.
It's more or less kind of a work in progress, the "alternate universe" in which the mers exist has other "mythical" creatures, so they have origins all they're own.


As for the cliché stuff, admittedly it's more or less my first real fanfiction and It really wasn't meant to be something I put every once of my passion in. I just wanted to do something to express my love for this pairing. 

I do appreciate the critique though, I'll keep it in mind for the future. :>
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