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Way to go! (Screenshot) by Coffee-Karin Way to go! (Screenshot) by Coffee-Karin
Cheering up Tails. Can't u feel the love?
I blame myself for this XD
Trying to do screenshot thingy

Cocoa belongs to::iconalexisrhodes122:!
Tails to sega

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xXJasieNorkoXx Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Your Art! I Like Cocoa Lee of You, And Tails of SEGA! :paww: 
This Looks Amazing! :D
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:iconcoffee-karin:
Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank u so much! ^^
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:iconleafy-serperior:
Hey, you made a couple grammatical errors.


"Your" is the possessive form of you; it means "belonging to you."

"You're" is a contraction; it means "you are."

Here, Cocoa says, "Your gonna do terrible!" This means "Gonna that belongs to you do terrible!", which is obviously not what you meant.

The correct way to put this is "You're gonna do terrible!", which means "You are gonna do terrible!"



You also missed a comma in the first sentence, which says, "Don't worry Tails!" Commas enclose a part of a sentence that can be obmitted, such as a name.

The correct way to put this is "Don't worry, Tails!"



The other mistake you made isn't necessarily incorrect because this is dialogue, and Cocoa would very likely have made this mistake when she spoke.

Terrible is an adjective; it modifies a noun.

Terribly is an adverb; it modifies a verb.

Your sentence was "Your gonna do terrible." Terrible is modifying the verb, "do," which means that "terrible" should be an adverb, which is "terribly."


All in all, your sentences should say "Don't worry, Tails! You're gonna do terribly!"

Or, if Cocoa isn't a grammar-conscious person, "Don't worry, Tails! You're gonna do terrible!"
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CTC-Tomboy Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HE MINE ( ง ᵒ̌皿ᵒ̌)ง⁼³₌₃



and manic




u know Manic sonic brother from sonic underground X3
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yessss! I know manic! X3
Aw u owe both of them! Nu~ >0<
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CTC-Tomboy Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes... so... BACK OFF ಠ_ಠ *grab tails*
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nuuu! But they are so cute! And FLUFFY! *Holds on tail*
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CTC-Tomboy Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ene
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
0w0
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CTC-Tomboy Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
e3e
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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DarkFury17 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016   Artisan Crafter
Beautiful sis
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thxs bro
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DarkFury17 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016   Artisan Crafter
You're very welcome ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
>w<
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DarkFury17 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016   Artisan Crafter
^////^
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank u *hugs*
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DarkFury17 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016   Artisan Crafter
You're very welcome sis!*hug you tightly*
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*hugs*
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Gentleman6 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They look so cute together >w<
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikr? They are too cute! :D
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Gentleman6 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed they are :) Btw I just noticed that she says terrible not good. Guess Tails is a bit confused xD
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah but that's how she is to tails they have a weird friend relationship
I would be confused too! XDD
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Gentleman6 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me too tbh XD let's just hope the best for the two ^^
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't worry I'll have more ideas for them two X3
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Gentleman6 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh really? Awesome! I can't wait to see it >w<
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe thanks ^^ Yeah soon u will see :D
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StellaDawl Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! ^^
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Coffee-Karin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!
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StellaDawl Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Np
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