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OC belongs to NeoNee101 
Aghhh first digital painting and animation.
Drawing this adorable nameless child was so fun.
I will try doing paintings and animation in the future.
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mute-me Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018
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Hi!Wow I haven't seen those species in a while~
I like her halo and little stars, and that they are flat compared to the rest, maybe you could add more of those elements (like make her marks/tattoos flat too) to make the focus more even. 
The anatomy is very complicated in that pose, and the arm looks very awkward and her thighs are way too short. If you look at any leg, you can notice the thigh and the calf are almost identical in lenght. The hair are very nice, I like their flow, but I would blend the middle more, to make it completely flat instead of trying to create hair strands inside this shape. 
Also I'm glad you included a still picture in the comments. After looking for a while at this picture, i got very irrated by the eye. For this animation - especially because it's blinking - it shouldn't be so fast and so repetative. Also I reccomend looking up some more tutorials, to make it look more realistic instead of effect of "squishing"

Good luck with your future works~!
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cococolors Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Student General Artist
I agree the eye squashing was a bad idea. Thank you for the help in the future I will do what you recommended.
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DOliphin Featured By Owner Edited Feb 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
The drawing itself is very nice actually, so I won't comment further.
The animation is not very good though. 
your main problem is not understanding how an eye works. 
An eye has hinges, these hinges control a piece of skin around a ball. Even though I guess those are teeth, just squashing the object doesn't end up working out too well. Really, you should be re-drawing the eye every frame.
also, understand basic principles of the wise old men or whatever.
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cococolors Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Student General Artist
I'll try that next time. Thank you for the critique!
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Jonskisart Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Wow, love this, very creative!
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cococolors Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018  Student General Artist
thx
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Temmious Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2018
I love the water color style, it gives the child a mysterious effect, it looks incredibly simple but took a long time. Your GIF animation is really good for a first try, but even so you need to work on it a bit.
overall- this is great, good luck on the competition
Im rooting for ya!
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cococolors Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2018  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! Wow how did you tell I used the watercolor brush? I got a little lazy on the gif animation, because the painting took so long. 
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Temmious Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2018
It looks traditionally water colored, Also I understand your rush in this art work, there is always a due date to those competitions!
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cococolors Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2018  Student General Artist
This one wasn't due very soon but I got my commishes to do ;^; 
I swear I have no social life anymore.
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Temmious Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2018
Well at least you have something to do when your homework is finished!
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NeoNee101 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah it looks really cool~!
good luck~
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cococolors Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2018  Student General Artist
Thank you <3
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