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Bakemono-ha by cococolors Bakemono-ha by cococolors
A closed species adopt I made recently, comment for more information on this species and how to make one.
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theJfluffy Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018
What a cute little squirt 
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cococolors Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Student General Artist
Thx check out my base for them.
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MadLaiz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Student General Artist
Hi, I'm from the Proyect Comment group.

I will start with the pose, even though this is a adopt, the pose is just extremely stiff, it looks like you just drew one side and then copy pasted it. Stiffness can be used for horror characters like for example the twins in the shining, because it gives a really unnatural effect. But whn you use it in a character that is supposed to be appealing, it just doesn't work, humanoid creatures then to be balanced, so even if someone is standing, they usually have one shoulder up and the hip to the opposite side.
Then there is the color palette, red and green are complementary colors, but it doesn't work out as good when you compliment a yellow-green with a aqua-green color and then bright lime green and light yellow. It could look better if you just keep the "ears the same color as the skin, and maybe used a more saturated version of her dresses red. then maybe the background could have made the pice pop out more if it was maybe a light cream brown.
Apart from that, i really like this characters design, it's simple but really original and eye catching. I especially like how you drew the face and the little detail of adding doll-like blush to it's cheeks.
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cococolors Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Student General Artist
Thank you for the help. The way you described the stiffness is quite literally what I did my only reason being to save time since I will be making these in large amounts. I will though be making more dynamic bases for the species with only the main designs done in this way. I quite like the eerie stance though since the creature is meant to appear alien. The colors I agree I messed up on and my intention was for them to be complementary. I really appreciate the feedback and will improve on newer additions to the species.=P (Razz)  
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crystalmonsterBATIM Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so cute!
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cococolors Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Student General Artist
thx.
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crystalmonsterBATIM Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Daisy you're welcome 
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williamtoaoftrash Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Species please?
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cococolors Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Student General Artist
The species is called Bakemono-ha or leaf monster I'll do deatails on them later.
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