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Mister Dancer - ch 19
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After gliding through quiet residential streets, our auto-car turns onto a broad avenue with other vehicles running bumper to bumper in lines. The two-lane roads become four-lane city bypasses, after which we spill out onto an eight-lane highway with a mix of auto-trucks, -vans and a few auto-cars like ours.
Marc seems busy tapping away on their cell and even makes a few calls on the trip. Their tone changes for each, going from stern and commanding with one, to polite and unctuous on the next. I stare out the windows and try not to listen too closely.
The traffic gets a little faster driving on a toll bridge high above huge basins and gullies that were presumably once ponds and rivers. Blue lights flash overhead. The car behind us has tinted windows, while on our right are a line of auto-trucks with high-end brands on the side.
I turn on the maps app of my cell and watch as we drive south toward a neighboring city.
We finally exit the highway, passing a transit center exactly like
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When did jogging get easy?
Okay, not easy, exactly. At some point these sweaty walks got faster, steadier and maybe even routine. The when doesn’t really matter. Now it’s easier than … work, maybe.
But work will always be hard. Why else would they pay us.
Hustling along the empty sidewalk, the late-morning haze filters the sunlight to a distant warmth. A tiny mail car shoots down the empty street, slowing only when it goes past me. Another streaks through an intersection far ahead.
Factory identical houses, one after another. Dirt lots, maybe an unkempt flower bed, empty driveways next to flood floors. Each home has a few visible differences: window curtains, deck furniture and other outdoor garbage mostly. Back when they were built, each of the thousand or so houses in the neighborhood had been painted one of a hundred pastel colors.
Are they able to use different colors in other places?
I turn at the corner. A few houses down the road, an old lady stands, water can and cutters
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As I've already explored in previous chapters with Vin's group office, cities in a telepresence work future would have to be very different. For one, with so many people able to work from home, there would be far fewer need for companies to have large central office buildings. That would mean less need for lunchtime restaurants, exercise studios, parks and all the other small businesses which spring up to serve the big business ecosystem like dry cleaners and coffee shops. So will cities die? I doubt it. Instead they might take on the “theme park” style, or in other words a place which people visit to enjoy that place. Imagine a Las Vegas or a Disneyland in every corner of a nation, but free like visiting the mall or a public library. There would be cities full of every restaurant or museum, or even abandoned places treated like parks.
What I like about Wil's mini adventure in this chapter is how jogging gets to be his superpower. The old guy at the top floor is honestly surprised and impressed to have anyone visiting him. Normal people in this world would never walk up twelve floors of stairs; they might fear their legs breaking, or having a heart attack, or falling on their way back down. The stairs exist because people once viewed them as a normal option, but now they are only slightly more used than the dumbwaiter. Next time you have to go up a few floors, take the stairs! Take it slow, pace yourself and enjoy the burn!
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