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This time around, things are going to be different. The usual narrator is away and I'll be filling in. Don't worry, I follow his rules, mostly; just a brief introduction and then let the story tell itself. But I should warn you, I don't see this world the way he does. Things will be different, definitely so; I like to think a little realism will go a long way toward making things more interesting. Reality bites, but is all the more wondrous for it.
We begin our adventure listening only to night's dry heat. It's too hot for the Kricketots to be still playing and even the Zubats and Hoothoots have gone to roost early. The only creatures still stirring now would be those unlucky individuals unable to sleep in one of Leogre's worst heatwaves in recorded history. Ah! Here comes one now.
The hotel's Wailord-shaped pool, not-to-size of course, does look tempting on a night like this. The young man is wearing a pair of Krabby swim shorts and a nondescript t-shirt, wiPokemon: the Risen - E1 - HTML by Cobrateen

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I've written a number of complete stories, from short to novel length, and in prose or script style. This folder is the first page or chapter of each, and in the description you should find a link to the next part. They're all a bit old as far as the writing goes, but I still like the ideas I was exploring while writing them. I hope you enjoy them!

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Normally I like to remove the word "comics" from a webcomic title because it seems a bit redundant, but calling the webcomic "Harry Potter" would make even less sense, other than the part where it's a comic about Harry Potter. Speaking of obvious things, it's also a Lego comic! And so it would have all the usual problems faced by Lego comics, such as limited pieces and a lack of special effects, but the creators are real wizards of Photoshop magic and even manage to give the characters varied facial features and produce a few background explosions while they're at it. But aside from how cool that all is … well, it's basically Harry Potter fanfiction, starting right where the books left off. Literally, Harry and pals are at the train station sending their kids off to Hogwarts and that's how the story starts. Part of the story is the adventures had by the kids, the usual stuff of forming the heroic trio and going into thWeekly Webcomics - Volume 5 by Cobrateen

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I used to read way too many webcomics and so naturally I started writing reviews of my favorites, giving reasons why someone might like or not like the comic. Go read some great webcomics today!

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Ian Chisholm
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature

United States

Favorite Quote: “Take chances, make mistakes, get messy!”

I love Anime and writing. Someday I'd like to write the scripts for original animation but for now I'm a writer-in-training creating worlds and characters and telling stories with them for my amusement. I'm always searching for people to collaborate with, especially visual artists; if you read something here that inspires you, I would be interested in enlisting you for a creative partnership. And I'm here to learn and help others learn. I want advice on how I can improve, I take on prompts and requests to sharpen my writing skills, and if you'd like a critique or some proofreading you only have to ask.

My 2018 avatar is an owl that visited us. There's a big old stump in our yard, and we believe rats live in tunnels below. One night an owl was perched on a shed nearby, silently staring down at the stump. Our flashlights didn't make it leave so we talked to it for a while and took pictures. We probably didn't help its hunting but I do hope it got some dinner that night.